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@13.I feel so sorry for severus his life is so hard. great story, update soon!!

*DB*

I would love the two of them to get her. Think they both would give her different things. I thought it would have been Malfoy going for her that would have been fine. However you have brought someone in that i don't like getting hurt and my favorite person with Hermione is my darling Severus so my vote goes to him sorry, don't want his heartbroken.

Chapter 13: Do I detect your bias in this chapter? Hmmm? Hmmm? You know you've a soft spot for Severus, even if this is the Lucius/Hermione section. Suck it up, girl, don't let that ebon-haired lothario seduce you away from your main mission - to have Lucius marry Hermione. I'll help you be strong. Just think of that sneaky potions master as...as...well, try not to think too kindly of him, alright? Snapey is kinda cute, but...but...Lucius is sizzling hot. MY bias, you hint? No way. I'm totally impartial. (Hides growing nose behind the Daily Prophet.)

Poor Lucius is being painted evil or at the least criminally insensitive in his behavior toward Lily Potter - although we only have Snape's word on that - while Severus is getting his licks in (and other body parts too, I'll bet) with our dithering heroine, Hermione.

Lily said,

Poor, poor Draco and Severus, caught again in a triangle, or is it a square with Draco involved? Hmm, your keeping the imagination roaming! Thanks for sharing, Pitt

Severus. I like Hermione/Luc. But I like Hermione/Severus more. Please update soon.]

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks

Loved it! Poor Hermione she's going to have a difficult time choosing between Lucius and Severus! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Your not making this easy! Well I'm glad that Severus loves Hermione (thats my favorite ship). I still don't have Lucius figured out yet, does he really love her or does he think she just a good choice for a wife?? I know he cares for her a great deal but does he love her. I guess I shall have to wait and see. Can't wait for more.

Maybe Hermione will have to rely on an adult like Lupine (or maybe Salazar

WOW!! I don't think that you have any idea of how happy you made me today, just by updating the story!!! I absolutely love this chapter!! I think that it may just be one of my favorite chapters!!! It left me guessing and my brain is just turning over diferent things that could happen in the next chapter. I kind of feel sorry for Lucius, kinda. lol I really really liked this chapter, CANNOT wait to read more!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!PLEASE! You're brilliant!