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for If You Go Down To The Woods Today

by Rumpelyssa

person mary
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I would never guessed that the Bloody Baron was the one who came up with the plan. Poor Hermione, if only Lucius told her that he loved her. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person BuffyXO
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Lucius does not know how to love and that is the one thing that Hermione needs to hear the most? Well, wouldn't that be where Draco would come into play? I would love to read more about his interactions with Hermione and I think he may be the key to building their relationship. The girl with is suited for Blaise, could it be Ginny since Harry is being such a Slytherin hater? Keep up the great work!
person wicraven
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let see are we going to see Blaise and Luna maybe..that would be an interesting couple!! Ron and Pansy are so cute together I hope they work out. Harry need to get his head out of his ass or he is going to lose his friends and nobody is going to like him. Lucius and Hermione need to have a very long talk about their feeling for each other. Poor Severus he's getting the short end of the stick, isn't he. Can't wait for more.
person Erin
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I no it is a Lucius Hermione story but I think it would be better if Draco and Blaise actually had a chance to get her. Or at least be with her. But yeah I love it anyway!!!
person J
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great story - gotta be Snape., Simply has to be Snape.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape! No... Lucius! Shoot! I really don't know, they both sexy badasses. Snapes out fit the last chapter made me wanna drool. YUM!! I feel really bad for Draco, I just wanna give him a hug, he's so sad. Poor Poor Draco. This chapter left alot of room for questioning. The big ones in my head are 'what is lilly planning to do? what does she wanna truely accomplish and exactly all who does she wanna watch? just Mione? or lucius too? Can Draco really handle being around Mione all the time just to get info for his dad?' I also think that Lucius is being slightly infantile by asking his son to get info on Miones turn ons and offs. I liked the way that you brought Lilly into the picture. Funny. Update please! Still awesome!!! Thanx!!
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Draco and Lucius because they can
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, okay, I
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LaBib, I'll NEVER speak a word with you again... "Dump Severus." HOW DARE YOU?!?! ;P!!
So just take Lucius, see how he'll repeatedly cheat on you until you're finally old and unwanted, get your black artificial... what was it, "ding-dong"s?... but be prepared that I'll give you a not-so-gentle kick into your lovely backside when you kneel in front of my door, begging me to share Severus with you. GOT IT?!? *sulks*
I'm afraid Lucius already started to manipulate you... you poor thing. The "Mighty Mouse theme playing in the background" is a definite hint that Lucius must have his fingers (or whatever else...) in this. ;P