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I love the idea of Hermione wanting Severus this will put a fire under Lucius.

How would Severus son react to this? Hermione would be his new mom if this work

AWESOME!!! I think that I am really happy about Severus and Mione. And I understand where Harry is coming from, but why is he being such an ass about it? I know he feels betrayed, but couldn't he be sort of happy for his friends? Also, will Lucius actually say those three magic words? I would love to see that. lol. I can't wait to see what his reaction is to what Mione plans, and I don't think that Snape can resist rubbing it in Lucius' face that Mione wants to marry him. lol. It would be funny if it just broke out into a fight between the two... I can see it now, Lucius, Snape in the Great Hall in a brawl... lol. Anyway!!! My mind needs to come back. Still great. Love it. Sorry I didn't review on the last chapter, but I'm still a fan!!! Can't wait for more!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!

I like it. Please update soon.

Gods this plot is turning out twisted as ever. LOL. Can I just say we need to bash Lucius on the head for being such an idiot? Honestly.

Loved it! I feel sorry for Lucius though. If I were Hermione I would've had a tough time choosing between the two too! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

@14. great chapter, look forward to reading more soon!! I'm not going for one in particular i just feel sorry for severus and now shes pregnant with malfoy's child! update soon!!

*DB*

Can't wait for the next update! Do u have an email list so u can email me when youhave an update?

Chapter 14: What!? Now Severus isn't sounding like canon. Smiling at everyone? No fair, saying Lucius isn't canon, and then cleaning up Snape's act. (Pouting to make my point. Not terribly effective but it feels good.)

Boy, that Baron has a lot to answer for, mucking up Hermione's life that way. He's a one-man stand against the double standard? (Or a one-ghost stand...) Yeah, THAT worked out well. Now Hermione feels pulled in all directions.

But, hurray! Lucius is going to be a daddy. He seems sincere, even if he can't say the words. Hermione's clever enough to read between the lines and she selected him to lose her virginity to, so she must have had strong feelings for him. She wasn't just in the mood to screw whoever approached her in the forest that night. She wanted Lucius.

It's probably just pregnancy hormones making Hermione hot to trot and Snape caught her in a weak moment. Snape can have her in your next story over in the Snape/Hermione section. Lucius needs to have her this time. It's obvious he's the more needy of the two. (I think Snape's been sleeping with McGonagall on the side anyway - he likes it when she turns into a cat, the pervert).

And I don't believe that 'Lucius forcing Lily' story for a minute. I'll bet that skirt she was wearing was just a wide belt, and she was advertising her wares and Lucius wanted a sample. Then when he takes her up on her offer, she cries foul. Hah! Let Hermione take Lucius in hand and make him a model citizen who her child would be proud to call father. (Yeah, yeah, I've heard the silk purse/sow's ear argument before.)

Lucius and Hermione forever!! (Marching up and down waving large placard about indiscriminately.)

I think Lucius will have to change a lot to be able to say

I like it. Please update soon.