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for If You Go Down To The Woods Today

by Rumpelyssa

schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person Jen Corvin
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING... seriously. I like the way you portray the characters, truely amazing. I like the couples you have in the story. I myself like the HG//SS and then the HG//LM... but I think I like the HG/SS more. Is she actually going to marry Severus? I really like the story plot... please update soon.

Jen Corvin
person dragon37
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO, Don't let Hermione marry Severus. Lucius would be so heart broken.
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that certainly wasn't where i thought the story was going. i thought this was a lucius/hermione fic... hmmm. it's interesting so far, and i feel really bad for hermione... 4 guys? personally, i'd choose Draco! can't wait for the next chapters.
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, how can anyone still be insane in this crazy Hogwarts?? *lol* I suggest they all better share a group therapy before someone jumps off some tower...

If Draco had ordered ME pumpkin juice, I would have drowned him in it, by the way. Disgusting. I don't think I'd fancy butter beer either, though, so whatever. ;)

Once again, great lines and jokes. I especially enjoyed
person DB1
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@15. wow great chapter, and loved the severus and hermione part, I hope there is more in the next chapter!!! update soon

*DB*
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15: I'm glad Ron has Pansy. They make a nice couple.

If nothing else, I'm also glad Draco is watching out for the health of his little half-sibling. Hermione should know better than to drink alcohol when she's pregnant. Good for Draco.

Well! LaBibliographe's jaw dropped wide open too, when she heard Snape tell Hermione he loved her.

So Hermione is more interested in Snape than in Lucius. And she wants to go against traditional Magic law to marry someone other than the father of her baby? Maybe she can have the law changed so she can give up the baby to its father and then marry anyone else she wants. Lucius would never abandon his own baby, especially to Severus Snape as the stepfather. But Hermione isn't acting much like mother material anyway.

SO if Lucius tells Hermione he loves her, she will do a 180 degree turnaround and fall in love with him? I think Lucius needs to de-ball a certain dark-haired potions master and kick that cuckoo out of his love nest. I'm not certain I even want Hermione to end up with Lucius now. She'd just be endless heartache for him, always pining for the ball-less wonder. (Just yanking your chain, HM - you're so pro-Snape...snicker.) 8-)

I'm so glad to hear you're over your cold. It sounds like it was a bad one. I kept checking your stories to see if you were writing elsewhere. I am very fine, myself. Thanks for asking. Much appreciated!!

Lovely twists to your tale. I can't imagine where the road leads next. I know who I'm rooting for (well, that's obvious), but I have no idea who's going to end up with our heroine. Just promise me if Lucius is shunted aside, you'll send him to me. (Hmmmm. Now I really don't want Hermione to end up with Lucius.)
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius better step up, Severus has one up on him, he already told Hermione he loves her. The Ministry better watch our, Hermione is going to try and change the law, and we all know when she puts her mind to something she doesn't stop until its done! Something tells me she is going to get a lot of support from people. Can't wait for more.
person BuffyXO
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, the surprising relationship was just that -- surprising, which means that you did your job as the author. I just think that the kink with the goat is a little squicky for my taste, but that is just my opinion. I must say that I do not like Hermione with Severus, I thought that this was a Lucius story. I know that sometimes things go off on their own tangent, but I still think that she and Lucius could work out. I am not a fan of the Snape/Hermione pairing, so her choice would be an easy one for me. Of course, you know best, since it is your story and I will read and review regardless of the direction that you choose. I think that Lucius's actions speak louder and clearer than his lack of words. He care for her -- deeply and the child should know of its father. Again, this is just my opinion. Thanks for working Draco back into the story :), you know how I love my ferret. Again, great chapter and wonderful work. For me to become this passionate about a story is a sign of a very good author.