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wow that was hot i love it .. later for now

angel

Awesome Bella. Lol indeed Lucius in the moonlight on a broomstick is quite yummy. He's delicious anytime.

Bella, Bella, Bella you know one chapter is never enough for you. It certainly is never enough for your readers!

This is a wonderful beginning for your new series. I bet someone saw her little tryst with Lucius that night, or they saw him flaying. Maybe Hermione got pregnant, or Lucius starts asking her to contact Severus or Draco for him. Or worst, Lucius asks Hermione to keep an eye on Draco and keep him safe from the Dark Lord. Or if she is pregnant, Lucius can ask his son to keep Hermione and the baby safe. Then people would start to think Draco is falling for her, or that the baby is his.

So many possibilities and so little time, I look forward to the next chapter.

Whew, that was the most fun I have had all week! The broomstick part was great, but I think the leather gloves were the sexiest detail...well, besides the description of Lucius' chest. That was really fun too. *nod*

*Sigh* - Oh, that was really nice... (dreamy expression crowning my face...)*sigh again* Are you sure it's only a ONE-Shot? :-)=)

I never know how you folks do so many stories at once. I can only write one at a time, as you all can see.

I always like Lucius getting into anyone's shorts, so of course I loved this one-shot. What else does one need for a Lucius story? Hermione is such a slut (can you tell I'm jealous)? I liked the vision of him on a broomstick. It actually plays into my next story, to some extent. So, back to writing for me. Thanks for sharing a private look at Lucius doing what he does best. Oh, yeah...

Great story! I loved it!

I Love you EBQ! I just Love you! Need I say more!