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Detention for not calling him "sir"? Mwahahahahahaha:P...Forgive me this sinister laugh, I just couldn`t help myself:)) Zabini vs. Lucius...hmmm...I wonder who wins this little competition? hehe...

Great stuff, keep on writing, I wonder where you take the whole action, and of course me(`cause one follows the other in quick succession:)) in the next chapter?

I`ll be looking forward to the detention:))

See ya for now!

Luciana

Lucius performing wandless magic, with the one sigle movement of his precious wrist...it`s so powerful...so sinister...
*snigger*

Paradise!!!!:))

Thanks Bella,see you

Luciana

Dammit Woman! What the hell is it with you and your thing about Blaise? Almost ruined a perfectly good story! I hope the rest of the story has more than enough Luscius Lucius to make up for it!

i loved the story update soon!!!please update soon!!!!
realy update soon!!!!

Bella' this was good and I need more please update soon pleasepleaseplease,

So far so good! This shows promises -- and with a jealous(?) ex, overprotective friends (who happen to hate her lovers guts) and another interested man, this could become interesting. I also wonder when the others (esp. Ginny) figurs out Hermione has had a lover.
I look forward to see how Hermione and Lucius' relationship progresses, and wonder what he'll do to head-off Zabini -- and perhaps make good with her friends.
I also hope Draco finds out eventually -- his reaction to his father marrying a "mudblood" (especially if she's with child that will eventually get a part of "his" inheritance) should be... interesting.
I must also admit that I hope for a couple of "accidents" for Hermione/Lucius and Harry/Ginny, so that Ron and Lavender's child gets someone close to it's age to play with...
Keep up the good work,
-Koppe

And yeah, I love Hermione gettting seduced by the big, bad Death Eater, too. It's just... we both got the point, it seems: we don't want her to be too naive and idiotic. She needs to be some challenge for an intelligent monster like Lucius. :) And you do that so perfectly, it's amazing! It's like Lucius really came to life... (plese don't do that, though, as I wouldn't know where to hide it from you others!!! *lol*)

I really like your choice to make Hermione more active in this story than she has been so far. I am glad that she is going to take charge of her love life instead of letting those (very hot) Slytherins make all of the decisions. I just hope that it does not backfire on her. I would hate that once she begins to develop feelings for Lucius, besides lust, and he finds out that she was playing him and Blaise, he may not be very forgiving of her and break her heart. I would also be interested in seeing how McGonagall will react to the pairing, since I have always felt that she and Dumbledore had something going on with each other. Maybe their relationship began when she was a student and then flourished under secrecy when she became a colleague. Anyhow, great new chapter!

Hermione is put in detention with Harry so I guess she will not have to fight Professor Malfoy off her. But I would not put it past Lucius to send Harry to Flinch for detention and keep Hermione to himself.

I hope Zabini does not find out that Hermione is using him, or things could get ugly. She could need saving form an angry Zabini if she is not careful.

I think that when people start to notice professor Malfoy

hmm mione do you think that would be good ... hmm and how will lucius act whe he finds out she is going out with blasie... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel