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Yes an update :-) Bouncing all over the place, and clapping my little hands together, gods I love your stories and it's like christmas every time I fall over them, hehe.

I wonder what Hermione will do now Lucius is "playing" around with Pansy... And now this notice using her and Lucius as an example.. Watch out Lucius cos Gryfindors do fight back!

man .. i hope mione give lucius a piece of her mind ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

YEY!ANOTHER UPDATE!!!!

YOU MADE MY DAY!!LOLZ!!
TODAY WAS A ROUGH DAY WITH MY THREE BOYS AND YOU MADE MY DAY WHEN I GOT HOME!!LOLZ...
SO UPDATE SOON OK!!

Dear Bella:

You have really outdone yourself this time with this plot and so many interested parties in this story. Maybe Pansy and Blaise can take comfort in each other's arms when Hermione and Lucius give up on their pride driven games? You are a true genius when it comes to the unexpected, since I do a small happiness dance when I see that you updated as I never know what to expect with your stories and it keeps me more than interested. Again, keep up the great work and please update soon!

Ok, EBQ, intermission is over! Bring on some more good stuff!

Chapter 4: I like the fact that each of the two sparring partners are trying to use human shields to protect themselves. They obviously aren't quite ready to be relaxed lovers with each other and plus it's a difficult place for both of them to be, being professor and student. I rather hope that no one truly tumbles to the illicit love affair so it can develop without a crew of interfering, well-meaning but unhelpful friends slowing the UST between Hermione and Lucius.

I'm looking forward to detention for Hermione. Sans uniform! Sans knickers? Whatever will she wear? Can't wait to find out. Lucky girl to have detention with Lucius. Is he going to be sans knickers, too? 8-)

I love the way how you develop the action...Pansy Parkinson, phew, poor Luscious:))

And Ginny`s spell...(I`m not talking about the Bat Bogey Hex):)
Well,I`ve almost died of laughter.

More? Pretty please? Keep writing, Bella. Fantastic stuff!

Chapter 3: I really like the professor-student dynamic and the classroom interplay was just scrumptious. When I got to Lucius' phrase, "Well, Zabini, beat that!" I got the biggest chuckle. Lucius promoting a possible love interest to Hermione and then we find a sly Slytherin professor congratulating himself for his sneaky progress. I just loved that.

I do like the UST of Hermione not falling for Lucius' intimation of the 'happily ever after' love that he dangles in front of her. Good for her! The other characters are all kept moving in interesting ways. Having Ron get into trouble with Lavender for something he never did will be an intriguing sidebar. Somehow I missed this chapter coming out, so now I need to read Ch. 4.

YEY! YOU UPDATED!!!*SMILES* WELL I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE SOON! CUZ IM EAGER TO FIND OUT WHAT LUCIOUS HAS INSTORE FOR MIONE AND OF COURSE WHAT BLAISE HAS UP HIS SLEEVE FOR HIS LUCIOUS (SHALL WE SAY )PROBLEM? WELL AS ALWAYS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOON!LOVE THE FIC!


PS. THANX FOR THE MENTION!VERY NICE OF YOU *SMILES*

-MICHIKO

man .. poor lucius when gets wind of what pansy has been tell people... hmm mione's detention is going to be some thing and what is blasie going to do ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel