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Well, I am glad that Lucius laid his cards down on the table. There is nothing more annoying to me is when authors turn him into a 17/18 year old who whines and is too proud to admit his feelings for Hermione. Again, I am glad that Dumbledore talked some sense into him and he chose to take the mature route. My boyfriend and I saw an elderly couple holding hands this morning leaving church in the same way we were and he remarked how sweet (and promising) that is for young people like us. I do believe that Dumbledore will need to have a talk with "Minnie" to have her go a little easier on Lucius and maybe have her plant little suggestions for Hermione to give Lucius a chance. I do think that Hermione would listen to her over everyone else. Again, I am so happy that you updated. Cheers and keep up the fantastic work!

I love that Ginny is going to help her friend just to torture Lucius. I can

You updated!Yey!!! great chapter!! and the whole Dumbledore helping Lucious with his Blaise problem..BRILLIANT!!!*wide smile*
hehe..update soon pretty please with a cherry on top! i really wanna see whats Lucious' next move..and the whole won won thing too!oh and of course the whole "Dumbledore plan"...sneeky sneeky!! I love your Dumbledore!!!

So update soon please please please!!!

man ... now blasie want to marry mione .. will the new plan work ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

@5. awesome chapter glad you updated. please udpate soon.

cya

*DB*

Chapter Five: Shipper names for LM/HG? Luciome or Hermius, or perhaps Hercius, but not one of them has a nice ring to it.

It looks like Hermione is preggers. Horny, sick, yup, preggers. So Lucius is going to be a daddy again. What I don't understand is the laissaz-faire attitude to Lucius being found with Pansy. I think Minerva should have kicked his pale a$$ out of Hogwarts. Is Dumbledore playing a deep game, convincing Minerva to allow Lucius such license? Very odd.

I hope you update soon so I can find out if Hermione only wants a wedding band or if she wants an engagement ring too. 8-) I personally think she should put Lucius' ring through his nose.

I don't know where I have been but I completely hadnt noticed that this was't a one shot anymore..... and its goind swimmingly (just like all your other work). I love the twists and turns that you've got going on.

Yay!!! An update!!! Hurray!!! This story is starting to be far beyond my expectations. Great stuff... Does all of this mean that Snape is going to show up? It would be heaven. Not only paradise. Heaven. Two of my favourite characters once again in one story...Well,nevermind, just daydreaming:))

But to be honest with you, I would never be able to choose between two of them. I don`t know what about Hermione, but please don`t let her fall for Snape( if he of course will show up.) It would be too hard for poor girl.

Everything depends on you, you`re the writer. I`m only your reader:))

Interesting stuff between Lucius and Pansy, but still:poor guy:)

And your idea of McGonagall being Dumbledore`s wife. Cute...

Finally, I`m still waiting for a detention, as well as for the next update, and I`m still patient:))

OMG, I feel hooked up by your story, really...

See ya for now!

Luciana

Wow Bella, your story is going in all sorts of directions and I love it! I now think that Hermione is going to have more on her mind that just what to call Lucius ... I just picked up on your hints layed throughout this chapter and then re-read the ending of chapter one. All I have to say is nice planning! Also thanks for suggesting "Riddle Me This." I really enjoyed it. And yes, I still am a McDumbledore shipper as well. To quote the movie "Clueless," "Old people can be so sweet." I love how you brought their relationship into the fold of this story as well. The developments are almost as delicious as Lucius feeding you strawberries in bed -- almost. Keep up the awesome work! You know how I adore everything that you write.

Wow, what a drama queen circus