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for If You Go Down To The Woods Today

by Rumpelyssa

person DB1
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@7 finally some development in malfoy and granger's relationship!!! can't wait for more, update soon!!!!!!

*DB*
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quite a lot for one chapter. So Severus HAS got laid once
person kirabates
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! i really liked that chapter surprise and saddness and oh theres a baby! yea! update soon pease
person CoralineBlack
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, so bloody damn good.. Now my brain is swirling around with the idea of Blaise as Severus' son, very interesting!

Can't wait to read more

~ CoralineBlack ~
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow you changed your name?!
Will Blaise bring back Snape and Draco? How will Draco react to his father having a new wife and a new heir to the Malfoy fortune? I don
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lucius so loving and caring-that's melting my heart!!!
Who is she going to love? I think she was more positive towards Blaise...or was he just a rebound?

I wonder where this is going? let her be pregnant!!!
person BuffyXO
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad that Blaise is not going to be played for a fool. I was worried about Hermione intensionally using him, seeing the it would be OOC for her, but mean too! I am also glad that you brought her possible pregnancy to the forefront, since it has been a simmering bunny for too long! I just wonder what else she did on the first time. Could it be ensnare Lucius? Maybe she was down there the whole time? She didn't wear underware for a reason ... anyhow, love the new developments as always. Thanks for sharing your tale of endless devotion -- I believe that is what we are all looking for.
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven: Hermione is trying to dither about caring for Lucius, but she's not very convincing, is she? Probably just as well if she is truly on her way to be Mum to a baby Slytherin. Hmmm, could any of Lucius' babies ever be Gryffindors? Hermione's a strong Gryffindor herself, but I think Lucius would have a hissy fit if one of his children got sorted into Gryffindor.

So we're shot of Blaise for a while. Good. He's superfluous now. Are we going to see Snape behave as a daddy? Will the scene shift to wherever Snape is or will we stay with Lucius and Hermione? (hint: I like Lucius - have we had him sans clothes recently? Hmm?) He seems very fixed on Hermione's neck. He needs to explore his options more, like for example below Granger's collarbone - way below. Doesn't Lucius have a private apartment at Hogwarts that could double as a sex pit for two? Just an innocent question...
person Mary
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This is getting good! Loved the part about Blaise being Severus' son. Never saw that one coming! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... basie is sev son and lucius is going to be a father again .. i hope sev does come back... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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