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That was quite a treat for all of us and yes it definitely was very hot. I just hope that Ron does not fault Hermione too much for taking up with Lucius. Maybe Pansy can soothe his confusion and save him from Lavender's clutches yet. I do enjoy the twists that this story has brought and am always amazed by the ideas you come up with. I just hope that they do not get into too much trouble for spending the night together, because who really could leave after enjoying such a lemony treat with two helpings? Keep up the amazing work that you always do.

I loved this chapter! Poor Lucius trying to convince Hermione to be his wife. And she's being stubborn. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Yey! You updated!! Oh and dont worry about it...I just got the chance to read this new chapter..(a little late on my part) but i moved and its been hell getting all the things over here and plus i had to enroll the boys into new schools so that was a hastle and a half...But im loving this chapter!!!really!! The whole hermionie possibly being pregnant thing hehe cant wait to see what happens!! And i was wondering how you were going to tie in the blaise going with arry bit and yey! you did!! blaise is snape's son Brilliant!! Cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great work!

-michi

I still can't tell Lucius' true intentions...he seems to be ah so alluring, welll, after all he's ''lusciuos'' Malfoy :)

I see why Hermione has a hard time time to resist him...which girl could if a handsome powerful man was confessing his love to her? I think he's up to something bad...why does he want to have a child?

poor Ron..I feel sorry for him....I hope it won't be his kid...

i think ron and pansy would make a great pair ... i hope she does find out that the baby is not ron's and im glad mione and lucius made up ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

very interesting twists and turns. can't wait to see what you'll do next. keep it up.

Since Ron now fancies Pansy I think she will let Lucius be. I think she was lonely and that made her mean. And Ron will be sooo grateful to her for saving him form a fate worst than death, I think they will be a cute couple.

I guess people will find out about Hermione and Lucius when someone catches them in the act. I vote for Severus catching them making love in the classroom, maybe Hermione has detention

Chapter 8: Hogwarts is beginning to look like the ark - couples pairing up right and left. Lavender can eat dirt (and marry the Hufflepuff) leaving Ron with someone who actually might like him. And I hadn't thought about it, but it's true that Ron really should have a woman who dominates him (like Arthur has?) for him to be truly happy. Pansy might like that job in a marriage. I don't think she would have been happy with either of the Malfoys - they're each too domineering themselves.

But right now Lucius is turning into a lovelorn lovebunny trying to court the one he wants. His method obviously got him laid - several times - but I do love him when he's snarky, although I guess this story's Hermione wouldn't stand for it and he's definitely operating at a disadvantage if she's already carrying part of his next generation.

So when is Snape going to debut? I can't imagine what you'll do with him - on the run, being a daddy - the poor guy has it rough. I wouldn't want him for my daddy (okay, maybe my Sugardaddy but no blood relation). Will Snape get paired with anyone? Sheesh, who's left? NOT Blaise's mom. She had her chance and I don't find her a terribly comfortable character.

You know, if Hermione's not already preggers, she may be from today's chapter. Those two never learn, do they? Yeah, yeah, if I had Lucius in my bedroom I'd be just as "dumb".

So, eight chapters from a one-shot, who woulda guessed? Now, let's try for nine. I'll get you started.

Chapter 9 - .........

8-)

Wow. Absolutely wonderful. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! :D

WOW!! Beautiful, never would have seen that coming! Ron and Pansy, though, honestly I think that I prefer her to Lavender, she seems evil. Total surprise, I really like. Very nice how Mione and Lucius became actual lovers again, I really loved alot of the emotion that you put into this chapter. I can't wait to see how the Ron, Pansy, and Lavender thing works out. Nor can I wait to see the next step for Mione and Lucius, and what about Zabini? Will you tell about what goes on in his and Harry's search for Snape and Draco?