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for If You Go Down To The Woods Today

by Rumpelyssa

person LaBibliographe
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Snape and Blaise seem content with their relationship. Calm acceptance. What was Snape doing on the moor anyway? So is Snape really going to try to wrest Hermione away from Lucius? For himself? Or for his new son, Blaise? I'm not sure why he's decided to throw himself into the fray, except that apparently he does not want Lucius and Hermione together. Too Late!! Hah!

I suppose there is still a tiny bit of wiggle room for Snape to head off Lucius' concerted attempts to marry Hermione, but she succumbed to Lucius so quickly in the woods that I think their bond is unbreakable. Even if she IS leading Lucius on a dance to the altar.

Ron showed why Lavender wanted to hang onto him, in his personal, private passionate session with Pansy. I'm glad Lavender is out the door. Zach is welcome to her (actually he has to marry her.) There seems to be a large number of trouser zippers that can't stay up at Hogwarts lately.

My fingers are crossed for Lucius to succeed with Hermione, but not toooo quickly. I do like UST with them.

Please update soon and tell us what happens with the potential Snape-Hermione-Lucius triangle. Hermione gets all the hot ones...drat her. Tell them I'll take the loser, okay? (As long as it's not Hermione.)
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. now ron know the truth and snape is going to try to woo mione .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Ron and Pansy are falling in love, I hope so. Draco will get jealous of her relationship with Ron. Draco was never interested in Pansy until someone else wants her. Maybe that will work for her if Ron becomes jealous and decides he wants her for keeps.

Snape is coming back to Hogwarts to woo Hermione, and Lucius is going to kill him. I am sure Severus is just taking advantage of the situation to go after Hermione; I think he was always interested in her and never thought he could act on it. Also Hermione probably always had a crush on Snape, so it should be interesting to see her reaction if Snape starts making her crush-fantasies come true.

Draco will flip when his father tells him he is planning to marry Hermione. If Lucius has plans for the future of the Malfoy family, he would probably talk to Draco.

After that news Draco could decide to steel Hermione himself, but I think he knows his father would disown him, so probably not. More likely the Slithering in Draco will help Severus steel Hermione away form his father, just to keep her form becoming his step mother. And to cover all his options, Draco could convince Zabini to go after Hermione too.

I think Draco is going to be one busy boy, and Hermione will be one confused girl!

person MICHIKO
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* you updated!yey!!! Ron and Pansy great combo!!I'm a Ron/Pansy person myself so i was super happy that these two finaly got "together" *sly grin* and whats this about Snape wooing Hermionie?I must admit i'm really really eager to see how that turns out..I wanna see Lucius' reaction to this new turn of events..and of couse how will Hermionie deal with these new attentions from a very oh soo darkly handson Severus Snape.Well i cant wait for the next chapter..so please please update soon!!
-Michi
person firewall
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - I'm glad I get to review this story. I'm too lazy to sign in or I forget to and then never bother. It's too easy to just carry on.

Anyway, I'm enjoying this story although I'm a little worried about Blaise. I happen to like him and would really prefer nothing awful happens to him. I'm off to read the next two chapters you have posted. Thanks for sharing this with us.
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
person catysmom
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more chapters. :)
person DB1
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@8. cool chapter. Yay for lucius and hermione!!! poor ron, hmm the pansy and ron thing, interesting, can't wait to read more!! Plese update soon

*DB*
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, great story!!!
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the one shot a few months ago, then I found it yesterday and noticed it wasn't a one shot anymore. Now I'm hooked, can't wait to find out what happens next.