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for Part and Parsel

by YamiBakura

person butterpie
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, so hot! Never thought of Harry with but Draco; still Pucey was a nice touch. I can't wait to see whats next.
person butterpie
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah detention and with two saucy Slytherins oh my! Obviously Harry is being outwitted and in such a delightful way. Go go Slytherin!
person butterpie
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Now its up to the boys to keep it up. Ha ha! Well and done for now you minx you!
person RabidSqurl
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I love how you ended it with a bang. ;)
person Anonymous
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, it IS 'the greatest, smut-wise' that I've ever read. Please don't stop writing it? I like the not smutty parts too, though they are few and far between.
person HazelWolf
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've gotta be kidding! Oh, come on, you can't leave it there! I mean, they're in a threesome when HD-ness is oozing everywhere, and Harry BOTTOMED!!! You've got to write more! Dom!Harry with some HD D/s smex!!!

~Hazel
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great!

Slashy Snitch
person DraculUnknown
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! WOOHOO....cant wait! lol
person Starscream'sGirl
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YESSSS!!!! u finally updated!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! ^___^
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want it to end! Want chapter 4! Draco was slightly jealous of watching Harry and Adrian? Hmmm.