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It is such a beautiful story.

Gotta have chapter 7! How does Draco respond to that?

Don't know why you're not content with the sixth chapter? I liked it, I really did and do! Like all other five chapters before ^^. Update soon.
The story makes me kinda come down from all my day-life stress 'cause it's so sweet and...don't know...I just love it a lot and hope for a really really awesome happy-end. =)

Well, I must compliment you. You are a good writer. Your style is easy to follow, you don't bog us down with details but things aren't underexplained. You have good spelling and grammar which is always a plus. My only problem with this story has to do with my own personal preference. I don't especially like stories that paint Draco as a poor, abused or neglected little boy because usually the point is to make you feel compassionate towards the character. And I can feel for Draco, but when it feels like the authors laying it on really thick, I just lose it all. I don't really find Draco to be a pitiable character. I don't buy him as being abused or a cutter. And I guess it's possible but I find that I just can't get into stories with him like that. Though he isn't the only character: Ron and his siblings, Hermione. Don't really find them especially pitiable in that role either. BUT despite this your writing has drawn me into the story enough that I do kind of want to see where it's going.

OMG! please update soon!!

Poor Draco, I feel so bad for him. Update soon!

I sooo need chapter 6!

LOVE IT!! Oooo, so very much! Please update soon!!

OMG! please update whenever you can! My heart is pulling for Draco. As someone who has gone through a similar situation as Draco, you're really getting the feelings across well. The sense of lonliness, helplessness, and the ability to control something, a single thing, in your life. I feel for him so much. Harry, just being there, is perfect...not trying to fix anything, yell at him, etc. really great so far!

C.

Thisstory is getting more and more awesome by the second! Update again!