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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story so cute and interesting keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapters.
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great. A creature fic that isn't about vampires and werewolves. I really like this and am hoping that you will continue to update.
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June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rabbit is just cute and Harry is really adorable...sunning...what view would Harry post to Draco? Nake image?
BTW, would that teasing sparkle another fit from our residence male veela?
BTW, would that teasing sparkle another fit from our residence male veela?
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
roflmao! im with rabbit on this one this is too funny!
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. i love harry!plant stories b/c they're so rare! Great job on this; I look forward to reading the rest.
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad the story has been updated!! Just yesterday I checked it lol can't wait to read next chapter, things are starting to get really interesting!!
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, love it!! will harry able to do the glare??
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 18!!! I wonder what Draco muttered and why is he really pouting!
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... Draco giving Harry a tongue bath while he sleeps. i'm pretty sure thats a form of rape, but its just so adorable!!! and Harry turns purple when he blushes?? omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!! squee!!!
ok, now that thats over with, onto the review.
i didn't like the last chapter as much as the others. when you go off to list the 'five things that Harry's mind registered' all i could think of was that it would be so much better if you just put it in a paragraph instead of point form. it just makes it seem very amaturish. Harry would also not think of DracoxSnape as hot. i mean, he's barely talked to Snape (in this fic) and when they are alone together, theres just insulting going on. if you want harry to think Snape is hot, i think you should develop the idea before just springing it on people.
i would gladly GLADLY! beta the last chapter for you, or even the entire fic!
on the good side though, i loooooooooved how you made Mia look. it was perfect and i now have the overwhelming urge to draw her! great imagination ^^
ok, now that thats over with, onto the review.
i didn't like the last chapter as much as the others. when you go off to list the 'five things that Harry's mind registered' all i could think of was that it would be so much better if you just put it in a paragraph instead of point form. it just makes it seem very amaturish. Harry would also not think of DracoxSnape as hot. i mean, he's barely talked to Snape (in this fic) and when they are alone together, theres just insulting going on. if you want harry to think Snape is hot, i think you should develop the idea before just springing it on people.
i would gladly GLADLY! beta the last chapter for you, or even the entire fic!
on the good side though, i loooooooooved how you made Mia look. it was perfect and i now have the overwhelming urge to draw her! great imagination ^^