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for Knight in shining armour

by Leenah

person Draconayzia
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was actually rather sweet.

Also liked how Harry got back at Marcus. XD Bravo!
person Amessis
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that! Yes, please do a follow up!
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I think you should do a sequel!! :-D
person zoe
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story/one shot, In hope you decide to make a sequel to it cause this was realy good. Iv read another one shot similar to this but complely diferent, its more about Draco as a kid and his mother reads him fairy tails, and instead of wanting to be prince charming of the brave knight he wants to be the princess/damsell in destrees. Its been a while since iv read it so I forget who wrote it and the name of the story, or witch fan fiction site I read it on, but I think you would probably like to read it if by a small mirical of chance you can find it.

Hope you make a sequel, and sorry for my horible spelling
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sequel!!! Must have more!
person Catstaff
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd read a sequel!

Only one mistake that I noticed... Harry's eyes are green, not brown. Other than that, this is faily well-written and very much fits Harry's personality.

~Catstaff
person juno
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you make a follow up I would love to read it. One thing about Knight in shining armour that I would fix if I were you is that Harry has green eyes not brown. Other than that its a nice start for what could be a great series should you continue.
person melanie
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please make a sequel!
person Briar
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd read it.
person Madamdragon(not signed in)
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I hope you do psdt more up! Keep it up!