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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story, but my obsession with snakes requires me to correct you: vipers are indeed quite dangerous. They are, in fact, the most advanced snakes with regards to the evolution of their fangs. You probably should have had Harry conjure a nonvenomous species native to Europe or the same type of snake he rescued from the zoo when he was 10 (see the first couple chapters of boook 1--it would be a great allusion were you to ever rewrite this.). This would be cute with a sequal.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. You are a good writer. If you are taking votes, I vote for continuing the story.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. You are a good writer. If you are taking votes, I vote for continuing the story.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah you could definitely do a sequel it was very good.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All though Draco is VERY OOC, I like the part of Harry playing Knight in Shiny armor.
Do please write more, i'd love it!
Do please write more, i'd love it!
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interessting, would like to read a sequel.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dumbledore sitting in an armchair with tea & scones*
"A sequeal would be quite enjoyable, thank-you."
*squeal*
"A sequeal would be quite enjoyable, thank-you."
*squeal*
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE. DO MAKE A SEQUEL. A STORY AS WONDERFUL AS YOURS DESERVES A PROPER ENDING, BESIDES IT IS CRUEL TO LEAVE THE READERS LIKE THAT. I PERSONALLY WANT TO KNOW WHERE HARRY AND DRACO'S RELATIONSHIP LEAD THEM. IT IS FUNNY AND CUTE THAT DRACO WOULD BE SO SUBMISIVE AND MEEK. WELL I LOVE IT AND I TOO WANTED TO DO BODILY HARM TO THAT NO GOOD FLINT...HEX HIM SO BAD HE WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO WALK STRAIGHT FOR A BLOODY WEEK. WELL IF YOU DO MAKE A SEQUEL KNOW THAT YOU HAVE AN EGAR READER WAITING.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*nods* yup definitely a sequel is needed! I really liked the whole damsel in distress thing! twas cute! harry's reaction to watching was pretty spot on although draco was a teeny bit OOC... oh well though, loved it! please continue,
Stef
Stef
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excuse me but if there is a sentence " Harry