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by Marti

person Megan Consoer
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Annie
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it. i cant wait until i have kids. ah to order a husband around like that =P great one-shot.
person Ava Allen
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was greate !!!! :-)))
person firewall
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahaha, too cute! I enjoyed it and sympathized with it.
person liquidvamp
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there is a woman out there that has been pregnant that can't feel for Hermione. We have all felt fat and ugly. You spend the last 3 months seemingly a lust bot, turned on all the bloody time only to have your husband worry about touching you. It's bloodying annoying. Way to write what we all felt/are feeling. Very well done!
person anya
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So realistic, and absolutely lovely.
person angel
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was awesome i love it

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person snapeaddiction
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So funny. Been there, done that.
person Lyssa
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
giggles..that was cute
person lisa
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh the joys of pregnancy lol. I remember those. lol. That was quite funny and sweet. and lol lemony too. Loved it. thanks for making my night lol.