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So, when she takes her trip to the north, will she meet back up with Severus? Dumbledore seems to have his hand in everything. I think it will be an interesting conversation when they explore her past. Keep it going.

Sansa

Normally I wait 'till the very end to review but I can't hold it in any longer... I LLLOOOVVVVEEEE this fic! It strted off a bit slow with the action and such but I trudged on 'cause I knew it would be good and I was right!!! God, I feel bad for her friends but this is fiction :) so not a tear was shed BUT I must say you play this sort of theme very well. Actually, this is the most well written themed fic that I normally do read that I genuinly enjoy! Rambling I know but I'm anxious to find out if she's just a regular Muggle or has some secret power....
Dahlias
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... Still loving it. I'm glad not everything is firy tale with rose colored goggles. It's a shame how they treat Severus but I can understand why you chose to write down tht path. I wonder what sort of ... gifts she hold but maybe I missed it in the earlier chapter or two but she's native american? If so, that's new, for me at least, and I respect ow you added the purification and all those miniscule details that pop out in the story. So far, my favorite and I'm not much interested into Other Charcters but for this one an exception can be made...
Dahlias

*squeel* <- of course that's a girl screech with all the jumping, hnd clapping, and big smiles *g* I just, gain, love this... are you tired of me now lol. Fabulous, yet, again...
Dahlias

... Intersting...

ch 21: I don't know what to type. Of course I shouldn't be reading at 4:19 AM when I haven't had any sleep because most of my brain just shuts down.

The new chapters were worth staying up for.

I am so suprised that more people have not review your story. It is simply fantastic. It is wonderful to find a really good Snape/OC story that is belivable. I am a huge Severus fan and absolutely love your version. I also love your OC. The charactor development is refreshing. Your story line is deep and I can tell you did alot of planning and shaping needed to write a great story.

A faithful reader
Hilary

ch 19: I promised myself I was only going to read a few chapters before going home and going to bed at a decent hour for a change, and yet it is now 12:30AM and I have just finished reading the 13 chapters posted since I first found this story earlier this month.

The focus on the original character using the canon characters to add context and depth has been very well done. Your OFC is really one of the most well rounded I have seen. The story continues to be written and presented well.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

ch 6: Wonderfully written, well presented.

I have read a few other stories were an original character was transported into JKR's world. Most have been very silly even the ones not intended to be comedy. Your story is very different. All is not sweetness and light and the OC is not taking the Wizarding World by storm.

Reading your story (and I am glad there were already six chapters when I found this story) reminds of listening to old time radio programs. Just enough of a cliffhanger to entice without overly frustrating the audience. The action and plot flow show a respect for the necessities of pacing and a proper respect for timing.

Lots more soon Please.

Please are you going to write more of this fic? I really have enjoyed it so far and would love to find out the ending.
I like the main character you have made it so one feels for her and wants her to be safe a happy. Plus those hints that her friends might not be who they say they are or appear to be.

MORE PLEASE!