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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no you didn't...you just left us with a cliffhanger the size of the Eiffel Tower.
You better update soon...or...or...or I'll bribe your muse *giggles*
You better update soon...or...or...or I'll bribe your muse *giggles*
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Anon for your corrections. I'll change those details in the next update, probably tomorrow. Sometimes I think that reading fanfiction is getting all those details mixed up, you know, like you've read so much stuff that's not canon that you can hardly tell the difference. You're right on both and I promise I'll change those. Thanks for reading my story!!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was hot i love it ... bad draco for putting such thought in people's head ~grins~ please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now .. have a happy new year...
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 -- You have Snape answering his door and describe that he is wearing a tight black T-shirt, yet when he turns to show Hermione his library and the labs, you say his robes billowed out. Are we to just assume that he had his robes on and open so she could still see this T-shirt, or that he put them on and you didn't mention it?
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 -- You write: "The way down was pitch black and the walls were made of stone, just like the tunnel she went through in the Chamber of Secrets, how suitable for a Slytherin. Hermione suddenly could not suppress a giggle."
Hermione did not go into the tunnels of the Chamber of Secrets. She was laying petrified in the infirmary when Harry and Ron went down to rescue Ginny.
Hermione did not go into the tunnels of the Chamber of Secrets. She was laying petrified in the infirmary when Harry and Ron went down to rescue Ginny.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update very soon please!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
taht was great i love it .. and the gift he gave her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awe.... I am so glad that the anger didn't last long on his part! It's so much nicer when they can kiss and make up quickly... among other things....
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting read. The last bits were an awkward situation handled brillantly.