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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update, this story seems really good so far!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Your writing style is wonderful and advanced. It has a wonderful flow and sounds like it was written by a seasoned writer. I fully hope to see you continute this story, I think it has amazing potential. I don't want to nitpick but there were a few errors that others pointed out as to the accuracy in details, but either way, they are easily fixed.
Please don't make us wait too long!
--Jenn
Please don't make us wait too long!
--Jenn
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks promising, but Hermione's eyes are brown, not green
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds promising to me, keep up;)
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uhm cool.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To your question at the end someone does care about what ur writing and hopes u update soon.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! you writing style is fantastic. I want to read more. You entranced me into your story, usually the writing here at aff is a little boring (Check out my story for instances... I need a beta. My writing style sucks) and find myself skipping a lot, but I actually re-read yours, hoping I didn't miss anything. Now thats a great start to a story. Please update as soon as you can.
Hayley (aka Sarah Granger)
Hayley (aka Sarah Granger)
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this looks promising. i really like it so far. good intro. until next time! (hope it wont be too long)
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite well written I must say. But it should get interesting faster.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jay, I like this story but there needs to be some improvement
Hermione
Hermione