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i really like how this story is starting and can't wait for more!YAY!!update soon!

You have a really good start here, I did spot a few errors and some wording that probably needed a little tweeking, but all in all this was very well written. I love to see new H/D writers and watch them grow, please keep this going. I'm not a good beta, Virgo - too critical - but everyone needs one, so hopefully someone good volunteers. I'm waiting to see where you are going with this.

So far got to say that I like it. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next when he comes of age. keep up the great writing, please update soon. *_*

I like this story so far. It will be interesting to see where you go with it and I can't wait!

thanks for the acknowledgment, I can't believe how many people read and don't review, I always think it's the least I can do when writers go to the trouble to share thier work with us. Anywho, it's kinda spooky, my real name is in 2nd chapter, just different spelling, never seen it pop up in anyone's fic before. I like how you are covering magic use and why Harry can do it without out getting caught, several stories just gloss over that and it makes you go, Hummmm? loved the line -Learn to spot the signs of impending maturity and avoid blood loss. The necklaces are a nice touch too. I love AU's that still stay pretty close to cannon. Now I am turning this thing off and getting some work done myself.

This is a really good story!!! Please update soon!!

I really like this. Please update again soon.