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for Familiar

by Vittani

person Jamie-lee
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You you .... hoboooo how coulddd u i think im ganna start cryin ..... not to b rude or anything but if you dont update soon i will find you and keep pokin you until you do XD beacause its a great story and its evil not to update it XD
person neela of rogue
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please let me know when you update this story. I am very
interested in what happens next. You spun an exciting
tale. I would hate to miss the ending. may Krai rest his and purpose was served. Will Ron and Hermione get back
to theirselves?
person burning serpent
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent i am really enjoying this

heres my email so you can alert me when the next ones up evildante@y7mail.com
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! :(
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Finally an update. I can't wait for more....
person amaltheanie
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey pumpkin, I've read this story in one day and never commented because I was too captured by it. It's a wonderfull story, with a good amount of angst, romance, creature... The theories are well composed. For the next chapte, which you better put on very quick, I would say this: why not do both? you can write a graphic one and a non-graphic. This way, both kind of readers are content and it's entirely their own discission. Ah, recommendations: "not your usual veela mate" WIP h/d veela draco creature harry ( not gonna tell what kind)on fanfiction "Double edged sword" complete d/h quite some ginny/harry het in the beginning but gets much better on hexfiles
If you want more stories please e-mail me, I'm gonna write one myself on fanfiction but I have no fans. pout so I have to find some people who'll encourage me.

Keep up the fantastic, wonderfull, amazing work
person poemkeeper
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I hope that your muse allows you to keep going with it. Don't worry what anyone else says, your writing is some of the finest that I have seen. I won't say hurry because as a fellow writer I know how much that irritates, what I will say is that I will be waiting avidly for the next chapter.
person Akuma
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My, oh my, I love your story. It's absolutely perrrrrrrrrfect. Can't wait for the next piece.
person Toddy
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I came to 'Familiar' late Three times I have passed my usual bedtime in reading it. Do not shorten what comes next if it will ruin the story. I presume that Harry has had some kind of bond made with Dumbles or Voldie and that is what the memory block will reveal - thus preventing Draco fulfilling the bond. I do hope you kill off Fawkes; I had never thought he could be an evil bird [nice one!!!!]
Looking forward to the next chapter.
person myrtja
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ive been reading this without reviewing once so i could catch up. n i finally did. this is awesome i love it! i love the fact that u made Harry a Draco. I love his animagus form n how not all the adults are blind until the end. i really really really cant wait until the next chapter for the memory. i love your writing style and u have a great n unique imagination. thank u for writing this. i hope you dont mind but i had copied n pasted it n printed it out. i was reading it during my PSSA's. it was a great time filler. im know im repeating myself but ur a great writer n i cant wait for the next chapter.