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by Vittani

person Lady Lynn
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmm, Hermione's acting against him, huh?? well just have to see about that.
person arealdeal
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like everything so far, just one thing and it's silly to mention it, but hair to his knees would just be bloody inconvient plus too girly. Let Molly cut it, she's dying to obviously, but still keep it long - shoulder length. I've had hair that long (in the dark ages), and you sit on it, get it caught in doors and all kinds of crazy things. Just thought I'd throw that out there, everyone else may disagree. Trust me, I won't stop reading because I think you have his hair too long. LOL Great story, keep those updates coming!
person angel
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow why would she lie to ron about what harry said to get them to be friend again and will harry say her about it ...... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person LoveGD
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Liked the chapter, and it'll be exciting to find out just what Hermione told Ron...
Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
person Zetsumi
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Ron's an unintentional git! He should have believed Harry when he said he had no idea what he was talking about. Stupid moron; well, I like this story and I would be most definitely honored to recieve an update. E-mail address addoedeb_fox@yahoo.com.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 12! Severus was almost human.
person Broken
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uiiiiii...What's gona happen, hmmm? geez, really, I don't get it. how come you can write this WELL??! I just can't... not that I'd be jealous or anything (=liarliar) ehe..well anyway, I want to want to ant to kow when u upload ^^
person kelley
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I like Harry's new look. Can't wait to read more.
person Catstaff
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting that Ron recognized Harry but Hermione didn't. Makes me wonder what's up with that... but I'm sure I'll find out sooner or later. :-) I'd appreciate being added to your update notification list, thanks!

~Catstaff
person Sheree
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting boring. When will Draco come into it? Are you sure it's not Harry/his snake because the snake is the only one hanging with him.