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by Vittani

person Heksy
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...you...you...COME BACK HERE AND WRITE...* "@#$&*%" grmbl...some people*
I am certainly searching for things to throw right now, girl.
Yes, Draco is in the chappie and yes I am happy to see this first "contact" didn't get the boys into a nasty fight right away.
But I am NOT happy I have to wait again. *giggles*
Nah...you did great.
Wonderful chappie, hope to read more soon!
person LadyKind
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my oh my oh my I love your story and the fact that Harry is going to be Dominant thrills me to no end...people rarely put him in position of power and dominance that your story is soooo refreshing! independent,Powerfull Dominant Harry gotta love that! ok write more sooon.....yay!!! Submissive Draco!!!!
person coyote
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story from beginning to current end (Hogwarts Express). I can
person Hazy
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soooo evil for leaving it there please write more!!!!!
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was evil!!! Sooo need chapter 16!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*longingly touches her bat reserved for whapping people who leave off on really mean cliffys* thats not fair!! i loved that chapter but..WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LEAVE OFF AT THAT POINT!!! AUGH!!!!! *curls up into a corner whining pathetically* pwease updated soon? this is one of my favorite stories and its really depressing when i have to stop reading one of them for a long period of time...
person stasa
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter. Can
person V. M.
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sup dude, story is still awesome. mind sending it to me in word format so i can save it to my computer? just want to be able to read it without all the hassle of the web.

keep going cause i'm anxious to read some more!
person V.M.
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i was looking over the other reviews and i think that a panther is an awesome idea. a dragon is just too big and besides, turning into a magical creature could create problems. much easier to turn into a non-magical one so that harry has complete control and remember, not one of the animagi mentioned in the real series are magical creatures.

Black panther all the way!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update again soon.