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for Familiar

by Vittani

schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I followed this story to here from ff . net. Great chapter. I like Manny. She seems very capable, and certainly mothering. She also has the older sensibilities. (Harry doesn't need to know where the kitchen is, the Ladies Solar will be for his wife and daughters, etc.) Thanks!
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. A little grisly, in the waking-up-in-a-puddle-of-your-own-blood way. I like how you described him. Will he cut his hair? I know hair that length is a pain to take care of, but if he does cut it, hopefully only a little? To the waist? I love long hair on a guy! Thanks!
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Krai is very nicely laying the groundwork to help Harry become a self confident young man. I also liked the free association. Interesting that Neville is associated with trust. Thanks!
person Windrose
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have written!! I cannot wait for the next update and am always excited to see the email that you have updated. Please keep the story coming!!!!
person LoveGD
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Wow, this just keeps getting better and better...
Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for your next chapter!
And I think recomending different stories in each chapter would be an interesting thing to do. ;)
//LoveGD
person master yaoi
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story is de best ever and i ad read alot of hp/dm slash dnot stop and tell me went you ben puting the reste online. p.s (sorry for my enlish im better in french)
person Kermit
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep writing I like it so far
person stasa
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee! Quite the pushy little familiar, isn't he?
person Draconayzia
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It may be short, but it's good! I really like how introspective this chapter was. Great look at how the guys think. Please update again soon!