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for Familiar

by Vittani

schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sup V. cool chapter. at least this cliffie isn't as bad as the last few have been. hope you computer starts working soon.
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I so hope the sorting Hat is wrong! Not about Harry and Draco getting together, but about something forcing them apart! I love H/D, and I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so... Good ending for the chapter, and I liked getting a look at Draco's thoughts, even if they were a little risque. Thanks for the update!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter with Krai. Can't wait to see more, and find out what the heck is going on! Thanks!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. Try to avoid the whole panther animagus form if you can, that is soooo overdone it ain't even funny. Basilisks are a little more cliche because it's a mystical creature and there is no basis to think anyone can become something mystical. Maybe some type of snake or a dog, or even a friggin ocelot! Just please avoid the panther *puppy eyes*

Otherwise the story is good, and surprisingly so is the grammar/spelling (yes, that is an amazing feat where FF is concerned and brownie points to you).

Can you send me an email when you update this? Thanks.
person SimplyMe
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!!!!! but something has been bugging me....isn't Beauxbatons...sp? an all girl school so how would Aiden..again sp? be there? i might be wrong but i really think Beauxbatons is an all girl school forgive me if i'm wrong i was just wondering!! but ne who back to original point i love this story update!!!! SOON!!!
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... I have to say that if I was wherever you are right now I would have a hard time deciding to clap you on the back for some awesome new twists or strangle you for the damn cliffies. Truly though it is a work of art. KEEP up the good work but with little longer chapters if you could. Just feels like a pain in the arse to only read a few paragraphs at a time. The story you recommended, "The Power of Merlin" is really good. I liked reading it.
person stasa
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter, and again so soon! :D
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person Heksy
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vittani, again you astound me.
The chapter with The Sorting Hat was very enlightening.
One thought though...
wouldn't it be better to let the hat speak a bit more
old fashioned or even in rhyme?
Just an idea *grin*
Now for something completely different...
Why didn't you tell me about the new chappies? Do you know how I have suffered?
HAVE YOU NO HEART WOMAN??? *going completely bezerk here*
@#$%^ the nerve of some people...*grmbl*#%*(&^@
Sorry 'bout that, shouldn't 'ave said that...
Nah...loved the chappies...let me know when you update again
heksy69@planet.nl

person Celticslash
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could never get sick of your updates!!!!! It an awesome story!! And thank you for the recommendations, it is so hard to find creature fic stories as there are so many websites!!
person Jerica
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope they don't kill each other.