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for Familiar

by Vittani

person Jerica
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's it? I was so hooked into the fic and then it just ends with the name Draco basically.
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's an amazing story! when you update it please e-mail me @ angel-rachey@hotmail.com, please! The 'draco' thing really caught me as well. you're a very talented author.
person LoveGD
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter!
Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
person Aalto
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so going to burn you on the stake if you don't let them get together and live happily ever after together! Real life is enough murkynes and dying and general bad things for me. When I read stories about Harry and someone else, I want them to get together, perhaps trhough some difficulties and rough times, but to get together all the same. This is not meant to be a flame, your story is very well written so far, but I hate reading these deppressing deathfics that keep popping up. You write very well but you could use a beta, or if you allready have one then you should get a second to support the first one. Anyway, a very nice story 'till chapter 18.
person LadyKind
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg I LOVE YOU!!! brilliant chapters...so very very creative keep up the brilliant work I cant wait for Harry and Draco to get together!!! waiting with bated breath my dear friend!!!
person Heksy
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dark elf/Draco?
Wow, that is one hell of a combination.
I am very curious to know what our little hero is going to look like,
after all the changes have come through...*yummie*
Thanks for the update
person stasa
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the blood lines, especially the elf blood. It
person Mari-chan
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If the baby wasn't sleeping beside me I would have laughed at the irony of the fact that the creatures name is Draco. I suppose that it makes since now that the bloods have been explained and we know what exacly Harry is suppose to become. I'm sorry that I didn't review sooner ut to tell you the truth I kinda shyed away from adultfanfiction for a while and went back to fanfiction.net in order to try and find all there is there for a while. Right now I'm reading a lot of Tom Riddle/Harry Potter... I don't know why but I think it's kinda cool ^^

Anyways thank you again for making sure that Krai didn't get booted out of the fic ^^ I wuvvles him soooo much!! I was wondering if Krai was going to be going with Harry to classes or not? I mean, I'm sure that since he is Harry's Famliar that he would be allowed, after all it would be pretty special a case, ne?

I think that's all that I should be saying right now as I've written a pretty long review^^ I hope that you get the chance to update again soon and I'll be sure to check regularly:P

Love always,
~Mari-chan~
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So need ch 20!
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have that book! that's why i was going to hunt through it for suggestions but never did *sweatdrop* i love it though!!! and cat demons rule!! i am still absolutely loving this!!!!