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for Familiar

by Vittani

person cw19403
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought I would check in again and let you know that I'm still reading. I'm definately still enjoying it. Keep them coming!

The chapter where Dumbledore was thinking about all the stuff he was manipulating was a bit of a shock. Yeah, I could see that you had set him up to be one of the bad guys but it was still a bit abrupt. On the other hand, I'm enjoying the build up between Harry and Draco. The more tension, the better, I say.

BTW -- what's with Hermione? You'll get back to that, right?

Coyote
person rainbow
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you enjoyed the story ^_^

Anyway Im running late for work but I wanted to review before I left LOL.. another great chapter and I cant wait to read the next

Ja ne
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrr that was evil!!!! please update soon. *give you bottle of creative juice* i heard it works wonders ^_^
person Roni
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vittani my dear i have to say Familiar has become one of my utmost favorable stories in the entire site lol i very much look forward to the next update. your writing skills are very admiring, well i hope to read more soon take care and farewell

`roni
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Umm... yep. I'm mad... all of it led up to a cliffie!!! Really I find cliff hangers a bit much. I've been reading this long, I'm not going to stop just because something actually happens!!!
person misslala
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ok, I just read this whole damn thing tonight...and let me say first off, it's blood brilliant! I love it! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE! hahaha please email me when you update, lmay3@carolina.rr.com I can't wait for more, can't wait to see what happens with Harry and Draco and I am SO GLAD you set up so much from the start. I like the angle of Dumbledore and his sneaky ass. PLEASE tell me that memeory will be unlocked soon. Harry needs it, I know he does, LOL.

I like the familiar - he's smart, he's cunning, its too good not to keep going. I am glad I hadn't found this sooner, only because it gave me the chance to read so much at once. Your writing is great and as I read I remembered you reviewed my story "For the Best" I hope you read the ending - you didn't review anymore after.

Anyway, keep going, I love it! Animagus, hrm...Lion is too cliche, a cat demon...hrm...I can only image how Harry looks and it is too delicious for words. RAWR! Thank you so much for sharing this story I love it
person Heksy
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woman...GODS...how long will you drag your feet? Update!
Nah, loved the chap and I think the muse is in for a little treat today.
How about some fresh made meade?
*goes off to catch another owl*
keep it coming hunney...
person Britt
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Exelent chapter, and keep updating. I would go with some preditory animal for Harry, like a big black panther.

-Britt ^^
person stasa
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I CANNOT believe that you have stopped there!!! You are such a tease!
Update soon, please, I