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for Familiar

by Vittani

person misslala
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good update. Sorry that someone flamed you so bad. Creativity must be dead for people to want to beat dead hippogriffs constantly and rehash JKs world. Canon can be a pain cause damn it if you are trying to be original. :/ Ah well, I am enjoying this fic, so please continue, good luck with your dissertation.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 25! That's whats holding him back? The fact that things never work out for him and/or Harry? He needs to talk about it with him. I'm glad he wasn't mad.
person LadyKind
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...suductive...an amazing story I LOVE A DOM!Harry!
person Trecklar
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well. Well. Well. This is interesting to say the least. Two things my mind thought of when it was in perv mode...

Draco. If/when he has a transition give him a self lubing bottom. After all if he is destined to have kids my might as well be able to enjoy making them without all the messy prep work. :)

Harry. I'll leave his animagus to you. I have no idea but a flying serpent would be nice. I noticed you never mentioned how endowed Harry was. Did/will that develop as well? Lilly was a muggleborn. Imagine if a circumcised Harry was to become "un-cut during all this. The look on his face would be priceless.

Me thinks familiar needs to take a bite out of Dumbles.

Trecklar@gmail.com for updates please.
person Heksy
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@Draeconin:
Not for one thing or another...if you are that bloody brilliant...why don't you write your own story and leave Vittani the hell alone.
Who do you think you are?
She is writing this story, not you.
You don't like it? DON'T FREAKING READ IT!!!!!
Djeezzzz...
person Heksy
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you, I actually like this Snape.
Even if he is a bit OOC.
I suppose that's supposed to happen, as he break away from the curse.
Oooohhh...hot little piece between our boys, yummie.
Gotta love that!
I was thinking about the animagus form and because I am not one for clich
person Selera
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great chapter. I like how you are doing things with Snape. Anyways Harry's Animagus form with how the story is should be a Basilisk or some other snake like creature.. maybe a Quazquatle. Or something like that I think the spelling is since as most are saying cats are over done and he is the light side snake lord.
person stasa
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would have reviewed sooner but I wasn
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy catching up with you, this is starting to get very good, can't wait for the RoR scene!
person LadyKind
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and I how snape is changing Next will be Harry and Dracos meeting correct?? Im looking foward to it....will Remus help break the imperious?