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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That DICK!!!!!!! That nasty reviewer!!!!!! What a complete ass!! He/she had NO right to criticize your story like that. Last I checked, you were the one who came up with the story!! He/she can just suck it!
I really like your writing!! I look forward to every new chapter. I liked your comment about "descriptive writing". LOL! I'm a freak about descriptions. I love how detailed you are. And I like the recommendations you leave for us at the end of your chapters. It's like, "I know my chapter's over, but check out something else to read that you might like!" ^^ I look forward to your next update. This was a very cute one. I enjoyed it.
I really like your writing!! I look forward to every new chapter. I liked your comment about "descriptive writing". LOL! I'm a freak about descriptions. I love how detailed you are. And I like the recommendations you leave for us at the end of your chapters. It's like, "I know my chapter's over, but check out something else to read that you might like!" ^^ I look forward to your next update. This was a very cute one. I enjoyed it.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
did he also tell Draco about Salazar and Godric? argh, I want to know what happened to Salazar to make him leave! and what makes the curse (you mentioned a time split? what is that?) happen... and of course I want to know what is going on with Hermione... btw, Harry never saw the twins did he? I believe he wanted to try his appearance on them too so will they appear? Dumbledore-bashing! yay! my favorite stories involve that! people make such good arguments against him :-P
will he also get the memory back and get the betrothel necklaces (?) from his vault out (you mentioned them for a reason right?)? yes a bit soon for that but I'm thinking ahead :-P also can't wait for when Remus and Snape appear more. (they will right?)
Draco's reaction to the Aiden thing... well you did say submissives don't get angry easily... so I do think he'd ask Harry about the letters first and then later Krai... and that conversation you didn't discribe... so it's good this way. people who think he should have blown up over it can pretend it happened in the missing piece with Krai :-P
is the animagus thing still up for debate? I myself have always liked the panther, wolf and snake. somthing water-y would also be cool but not a regular fish or something please? :-P I generally don't like the multiple animagusthing but I can stand it if people don't use magical creatures for it (no one in the book has a magical creature as animagusform!). but you mentioned animagus class in the Hogwarts letter... there have been only 7 (or was it 9?) registered animagi in the past century and if there was a class there would be more registered ones... so that is one thing that always irks me in stories... it didn't really bother me in this story so far since so far the booklist is the only reference to a classactivity but here's an advanced warning :-P
thank you for the recommendations and I hope for more soon!
btw... curiosity killed the cat= curiosity killed the catdemon? just something that just popped into my head...
will he also get the memory back and get the betrothel necklaces (?) from his vault out (you mentioned them for a reason right?)? yes a bit soon for that but I'm thinking ahead :-P also can't wait for when Remus and Snape appear more. (they will right?)
Draco's reaction to the Aiden thing... well you did say submissives don't get angry easily... so I do think he'd ask Harry about the letters first and then later Krai... and that conversation you didn't discribe... so it's good this way. people who think he should have blown up over it can pretend it happened in the missing piece with Krai :-P
is the animagus thing still up for debate? I myself have always liked the panther, wolf and snake. somthing water-y would also be cool but not a regular fish or something please? :-P I generally don't like the multiple animagusthing but I can stand it if people don't use magical creatures for it (no one in the book has a magical creature as animagusform!). but you mentioned animagus class in the Hogwarts letter... there have been only 7 (or was it 9?) registered animagi in the past century and if there was a class there would be more registered ones... so that is one thing that always irks me in stories... it didn't really bother me in this story so far since so far the booklist is the only reference to a classactivity but here's an advanced warning :-P
thank you for the recommendations and I hope for more soon!
btw... curiosity killed the cat= curiosity killed the catdemon? just something that just popped into my head...
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sup Vittani, hey that was a not so bad cliffie. i like how the story is still interesting. buen suerte en tus examenes. good luck on your exams
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you updated! I think Draco's reaction was just fine. I think because of everything that has happened to him lately and from what Harry just told him, that he would not have blown up...much at least. So when exactly do we get to see what Harry's animal form is?
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the recommendation. I love your story and I look forward to the next bit.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the new chapter, Draco
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im so happy tha finally got together. i love it.
In addition; you have a gift when it comes to writing howlers.
In addition; you have a gift when it comes to writing howlers.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wiat for the next chapter!! and don't let the flame you got get you down. I love the story and your writing style.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Ive just finished reading what youve got done so far and I must say
Ive really enjoyed it. Im a big fan of creature fics and I love your
little snake as Harry's familiar. Keep up the good work and dont worry
if you occasionally get a bad review. No one but you knows how much
time and effort youve put into this. Treasure the good and forget the bad.
I hope to read more from you soon.
DF
Ive just finished reading what youve got done so far and I must say
Ive really enjoyed it. Im a big fan of creature fics and I love your
little snake as Harry's familiar. Keep up the good work and dont worry
if you occasionally get a bad review. No one but you knows how much
time and effort youve put into this. Treasure the good and forget the bad.
I hope to read more from you soon.
DF
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter!!! Also on the note you had at the beginning of the chapter, I think you write very well. I also love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon.