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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,
I just read your story, and well, I think the fact I read all 25 chapters in one breath should say enough about the quality ;) I like your sstyle, and you're very good with tension arcs. But I do feel some things are a bit over the top. Here I aim on all those different bloodlines in Harry, he became a bit to powefull and special to my taste. I do love Krai though. The looks, the talk, everything :) I think Krai is a very respectable snake. I wonder when we're going to find out what's with Hermione... It would be a shame to loose her. I also like the cold Dumbledore, I hope you will get round to show us more of his charachter. I do miss the opld Snape though, and I feel the imperius curse is a bit obvious. I can't realy believe a powerfull wizard as Snape would be under the imperious for such a long time. But then again, the Snape that's coming out is interesting as well, I wonder how much more we will see of him.
Loved your story, hope you update soon. :) (and I hope my english is still understandable, and not too Dutch ;) )
I just read your story, and well, I think the fact I read all 25 chapters in one breath should say enough about the quality ;) I like your sstyle, and you're very good with tension arcs. But I do feel some things are a bit over the top. Here I aim on all those different bloodlines in Harry, he became a bit to powefull and special to my taste. I do love Krai though. The looks, the talk, everything :) I think Krai is a very respectable snake. I wonder when we're going to find out what's with Hermione... It would be a shame to loose her. I also like the cold Dumbledore, I hope you will get round to show us more of his charachter. I do miss the opld Snape though, and I feel the imperius curse is a bit obvious. I can't realy believe a powerfull wizard as Snape would be under the imperious for such a long time. But then again, the Snape that's coming out is interesting as well, I wonder how much more we will see of him.
Loved your story, hope you update soon. :) (and I hope my english is still understandable, and not too Dutch ;) )
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh WOW i REALLY LOVE your story. i like your style of writing soooo much. and i definitely liked the way you worded your scene with draco after the ROR, the sentences were perfect, how draco couldnt think and everything. sorry i didnt review all the other chapters but i just decided to wait and review after i was done. plus it was so good i didnt want to stop reading between each chapter, lol. and just so you know, that other review who totally flamed you, i dont know what they're on about but i think your story is brilliant and im definitely on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. i told my friend about this, by the way, and she likes it alot too. hey i think thats the longest review ive ever left, lol. well anyways, great writing, keep it up!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh sorry, I forgot to mention, I could totally beta for you if you really think you need one, but personally I think you're doing okay, just some minor mistakes but nothing that really stands out. Anyways, feel free to email me if you decide you need a beta.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I haven't read this fic as yet and likely won't for a while;
waiting for it to be completed. Any more WIP's for me and I think I'll go crazy
waiting for the update. Just letting you know that I think this sounds (from the
summary obviously)quite interesting and I can hardly wait to actually read it ^_^
waiting for it to be completed. Any more WIP's for me and I think I'll go crazy
waiting for the update. Just letting you know that I think this sounds (from the
summary obviously)quite interesting and I can hardly wait to actually read it ^_^
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!!!!
Yeay...thanks so much for sharing.
I just finished two double-chocolate-up-side-down cakes.
Sending one over to you.
* if I can ever catch that #&^$%@! owl *
Yeay...thanks so much for sharing.
I just finished two double-chocolate-up-side-down cakes.
Sending one over to you.
* if I can ever catch that #&^$%@! owl *
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Loved the decryption, very passionate and graphical.
Very good chapter, something to keep us going :D
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Very good chapter, something to keep us going :D
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh yay! I am excied that you updated! :) I absolutely love this story! :) I can't wait to see what happens when they actually get together.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed before, but I've been reading all along. This chapter was really well done. I could picture the scene exactly the way Draco imagined it. Good luck with your exams, and thanks also for the other recommendations.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Vittamininini...I have been having a bit of fun withs zhe mead.
A bit toooo muchz...I z-z-zink...
I had 3 bottulz, but lost 1...teehee
Nah, just kidding.
Sending my house elf Skippy right over with your treat.
Don't be drinking it all at once now, you hear?
Hun, I seem to be having trouble sending mail to you.
I keep getting "delivery failure".
So please send mail to heksy@msn.com.
That may do the trick.
And by the way: you are very welcome about the scaring away the bad man.
He's a jerk!
A bit toooo muchz...I z-z-zink...
I had 3 bottulz, but lost 1...teehee
Nah, just kidding.
Sending my house elf Skippy right over with your treat.
Don't be drinking it all at once now, you hear?
Hun, I seem to be having trouble sending mail to you.
I keep getting "delivery failure".
So please send mail to heksy@msn.com.
That may do the trick.
And by the way: you are very welcome about the scaring away the bad man.
He's a jerk!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I love it! Making at least some of the Slytherins "good", Dumbledore (or as another author that I read terms him, "Dumb Old Whore!") being shown as the manipulative bastard that he is, and FINALLY! someone making RON the understanding, grown-up friend, instead of Hermione, is brilliant! Which reminds me, when will we find out what's going on with Hermione, anyway? I love the bits of humor in it, and the way you're developing Harry and Draco's relationship is wonderful! Can't wait to see what you do for Severus and Remus' (which is my 2nd fav pairing, next to Harry/Draco, btw) mating! Keep up the good work and can't wait til you update again!!!