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by Vittani

person Aaliyah
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh boy, now I'm curious, I want to know what's in that book! lol. that was great, as usual. i think maybe you should have a chapter soon that has Harry and Draco just spending a day together, getting to know each other and stuff. that's all I have to say, so anyways good job, write more soon!
person Melagic
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods! Please update soon. This is getting g-o-o-d.
person Jiall
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was not expecting any of the revelations you put forth in this chapter. The body, is an interesting addition which can probably be used as a wonderful propaganda tool for Harry. My question is what he's going to do with the egg and wonder if Riddle locked it away.

I think that this is a great story, one that I hope you never get tired of. Despite the opinions of others.
person misslala
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Wow, that was highly inventive the way Salazar was hidden in the chamber. :) I like that idea a lot. I can't wait to see what happens when Harry is able to get to the journal, how sad for Voldemort to find out that the colors were both Gold/Red and Siler/Green. I am sure that was another thing that made him nuts. I can't see how he would be excited about sharing what he thought was his "right" with Harry, lol That's soo good :)

I can't wait until you update again, I am so excited about this story :)
person Lucia
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiyas!!!!
OH gods!! I can't belive I finished reading all the chapters! yay! ^_^
This is the first Harry/Draco fic I've ever read, and up to now, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! xD
The story-line is amazing, and the way the character's develop id flawless ;D
I'm absolutely in love with Krai! ^.^ His character is by far my favourite OC of all my fanfic readings... which is quite a lot lol :P And also how you brought Blaise in this story really amazes me... I wonder when will he start flirting with Ron... o.O After all he DID said he like red-heads ;P
And what's up with Hermione? I'm really curious about that... o.O
Anyways, another questin I had: could Harry, in a remote posibility, have "Angel" blood? 'cause you know, in one of the chapters when he's getting used to the changes he says his back itches, mainly in the shoulders: could it be wings? or is it a side effect of his Draco blood o.O
Well, I better cut this or it'll become a monography xD
Can't wait to see you again
Ja nE
and some wishes for next chapters: H/D fluff, with some RL/SS [a pairing I've never read before and am utterly courious about], some good Snape also [gotta love 'im] and Krai of course!!!! [If he could annoy Dumbledore a little, all the more apreciation ^______^]
p.s: Sorry sorry, I'll leave in a minute! but I really need to know, what does "bar" means? 'cause I'm relatively new at reading and writting in english, so, if you could answer that I'd be greatly appreciative ;D
Now yes, Ja nE!!!!!!!!!!!
person wvsailor
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Love it so far! Is Dumbles going to be as evil as he sounds? I've never liked the character, to manipulative for his own good and he never seems to get caught. Looking forward to you next update!
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how in depth your story is. It makes it a bit slow-paced, but I think it is necessary for the depth of AU that your story is. I like ^_^
person Jerica
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are they sure no one saw them? I mean someone could have been there and then left with them noticing because they were too caught up in each other. What are they going to find?
person Jan
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this bloody story. Can't wait for another update. So please, please update soon. :D
person stasa
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, all I can say is, I most certainly hope that someday somebody will answer my question that way