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Well, Tipsy got home and went right into the kitchen, after profusely apologising.
Mimsy came to tell me there were some bottles of Ogden's missing, after Tipsy arrived...I wonder, hahahaha.
Anywho, loved this chapter.
It sets the mood for what is about to come.
You did very well.
Update soon and please send me a heads-up, thanks.
Oh yeah...the visit will occur in december, for christmas, or did I already tell you that?

hey great fic. Although I don't get how Krai talking to Draco is ever going to help Harry and his relationship. Its Harry that needs to know he's talking to Draco and Draco that needs to know he was talking to Harry. If Draco finds out he's talking to a snake I doubt he'd be impressed or happy. I wouldn't. Just when you think you can open up to someone they are just being dishonest. it's rotten.

ANd you don't have to jump down Shree's throat. She didn't say she hated your story. ONly she was getting board. Meaning she likes the premise and wanted to continue liking it. You don't have to be snide. It makes you look bad. Just because a review might not be all gushing and oohs and ahs doesn't mean the reader hates your story enough to stop reading. Alot of readers review in hopes that what they review will impact future chapters so that means they let you know what they like and don't like. You were kind of harsh in your response. And you don't have to respond to negative reviews or reviews that don't sing your praises. KNowing how to take reviews of both the good and bad kind is part of being a good writer.

So you killed Aiden off. Well that's better than nothing, I suppose. It still seems rather dishonest, though.

So, after reading Draco's thoughts his now passed away friend Aiden, the whole situation all the sudden reminded me of Dumbledore and Harry. The ends justify the means. Harry is a bit humble, knows what muggles are all about (good, bad, human), has loss many people to VoldyMort, but he has also defeated him many times and is building a confidence there, also has a lot of hang ups now that can be manipulated, etc...So Dumbledore may have gotten Harry that way by ommitting things, ignoring things, encouraging things..SO. No biggie. In the end Harry is better for it right? The ends do justify the means. Right?

So now Draco is on his way to "Harry's" side. Of course he got that way cause of a imaginary/non existant relationship with a nobody named Aiden who has now perished unjustly by the hand of Pervy Voldy Pants...but its no big right, just a little lie. The ends justify the means. Now Draco is on his way to being the perfect mate for Harry-kins. Little lies, by and by...no big.

So how is Dumbledore this big-bad? and Krai...he a saint, right?

Using magic he snuck beneath the compartment door (even with that it was a tight fit) and casting a varied form of legilimens (to read thoughts not invade) listened to the boys fears. And then he knew exactly what to do.

He ( this snake familiar) is just taking all kinds of liberties, ain't he. So he uses magic to read thoughts and fears of another to in fact use that to his own and his "masters" own advantage. No, that is not an invasion of privacy. No, that is not over stepping ones boundaries. It is perfectly ok and innocent doings because the ends justify the means. ::bat my pretty little eyes:: uh-huh

Hello Dumbledore. (actually I think it is all a bit worse than Dumbledore)

interesting new chapter and I agree wholeheartedly with your story recomendation this chapter it's one of the best new ones out there

I lvoe your story! I'm so glad you updated.

OMG, that was a really good chapter! Harry's speech was amassing, it kept me glued to my seat, I don't think I even blinked! Excellent reading...
Harry is getting all heroy again isn't he? Bloody Gryffindor! Never mind, he'll get over it soon :D
Did I mention I loved the switch of roles in the bonding... Don't know how you came up with it, but I absolutely love it!
Keep going, I need more :)

It's xcellent aye, I really like Harrys familiar Krai-he sounds interesting,
can't wait for the next chapter

I love your story as allways but I was wondering if you have ever heard of a harry snape story that is harry being a veela and the ruler of the veela not to metion heir of all the founders and merlin