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by Vittani

person Sheree
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
V no sweat, don't worry about it, it's cool. Good chapter. Krai wouldn't have stayed away from Harry this long so did something happen to him? I don't particularly care for him because, to me, he's just another Dumbledore with his own manipulations (has an awful lot for a snake, doesn't he?)but I am curious to where he's been. I don't know what your plans are but Harry and Draco don't seem like mates to me. They seem to hardly be in the same chapter and when they are they act more as friends than mates. Will there be more personal interactions between them? Later.
person Jan
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Krai is well and that Dumbledore hasn't caught him.

I too loved the movie, I took my daughter to see it the very first day and I tell you I should of waited for things to cool because it was hard to 1: find a place to sit; 2: To purchase food, food line was ridiculously long(I was on that line about half an hour, just to buy popcorn and drinks for us); I am so glad that I bought the tickets 4 days before hand because when I got there an hour early the line was... well I can't explain it but the funny thing was that the people where going crazy because they wanted to see the movie at that time and they were sold out. the only time that I saw that didn't have a sold out on the time was for the show of 11:59 PM.
Anyway...
Please update soon. ^_^
person misslala
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I like the estrangement. Harry needed to see how much he needed Krai, and he was beginning to forget the reasons.

I loved the movie! Luna was absolutely brilliant in my opinion. She pulled off that aloof attitude perfectly! I was glad it went the way it did!!! :) I can't wait to see what you have cooked up next!
person Bri
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i havent finished reading the last chapter but i hav every intention of doing so after i finish reviewing. im really sorry about not reviewing b4 but i just recently started reading and i usually dot read wips. i hate great works that arent finished. by the way this is one of them. i am quite anxious to see how harry defeats voldemort and dumbledore (manipulative bastard). i also love the concept of draco being pregnant. i kno that u didnt intend for it to be super long but i think in order to giv each of ur plot bunnies full and healthy lives will make this story all the better. long fics are not that bad, theyre just that, LONG! and i think if this fic were longer the ending would be great and the readers wouldnt feel jipped at the end. i've read a lot of fics where i felt slighted at the end becuz it was abrupt and very evident that the author lost interest. i fear that u will get discouraged becuz of some none persistant idiots that hav no clue wut it takes to make a great story. dont let them get u down! well i said all that to say i can't wait for the greatest ending to the epic saga that is familiar!
-devoted fan!
person lacyrlelic
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i've been stalking your story for a while and have decided that i should post something -if for no other reason than to let you know that someone is reading-. i als have a recommendation for you. one of my all time favorite harry potter fics is "Harry Potter and the Children of the Future" by Ahja Reyn. It is hilarious (it always brings a smile to my face). its on fanfiction.net though. i'll sit here like a dog under the table waiting for any scraps you throw my way.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The war is on!

I want to comend you on that speach you wrote for Harry a chapter or so ago. It was very well writen and displayed the conviction he had for his beliefs in an incredible manner. I'm also glad Pansy is on their side. I love the fact that she loves Neville. Neville never gets any play in these stories. Poor Neville.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 33! Pansy and Neville will make a cute couple!
person misslala
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!! I like it. I'm glad Pansy isn't a bad guy!! I like how she likes Neville! Can't wait to see what you have next, lol
person Sheree
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First, thank you hey now for defending me. That was really nice of you. Second, Vittani, I did tell you why I was bored. It seemed that the interactions with Harry and his snake were the only ongoing interactions for chapter after chapter. It seemed as if the summer was never going to end. I don't mind stories with a lot of chapters as long as they move quickly and it was as if it wasn't moving forward. I still check in from time to time and read what's been updated. Of course it's rare that I review again if someone takes offense to what I've said in a previous review; however, I really liked the new chapter and the relationship between Draco, Blaise and Pansy. I'm glad Pansy is loyal to them and I think she and Neville would be cute together.
person Jan
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I am so happy to see that Pansy is with them. Hope that they all end up with their loved one's. Please update soon. ^_^