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by Vittani

schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story i just finished it all the way though today it is really good. normaly i dont like the harry/draco paring but you made it work really well. i like the whole flying snake called draco too thats really neat. i will defenatly keep reading. i have read the 7 book and i did it in 8 hours. yea me!!! it was good any way i hope you update soon.
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have you ever thought to get in contact with a publisher and starting yor own series of books? Becuase you are awsome! Took me three days to read story from the beginning and I love every bit of it. I believe you can become a great author someday if you havent started your own book already.

Anyway, peace out and update soon.

Naruto_lovr
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it has been awhile since I last reviewed this absolutely fucking fantastic story. I love it! Hell ya V. it just gets better and better with every chapter that you post. Oh BTW HP 5 was a good movie. I thought that it cut out a lot of good stuff though. The Half Blood Prince is my favorit book in the series, mainly because the old coot bites the dust as we Yanks say. Anyway, awesome job and if you stop writing after you're done with this story, I'd be forced to kidnap you and make you write. Brilliant work.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohmigosh! who is the letter from?? (maybe krai is writing him? I doubt it, but it would be neat if Harry got a post-card from the snake vacationing in Majorica) ;)
person Aaliyah
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was unexpected...i mean the part where Krai and Harry kind of go off on their own for a bit. but im glad that Harry now knows about Dumbledore. I can't wait to see when Harry finds out what Pansy and Draco meant when they were talking about whether he knows what he is yet. This chapter left me wanting more, as usual. You're a great writer, I'll be sad when this story ends. By the way, i saw the OTP movie and i didnt think it was as good as it could've been, and Draco was hardly in it at all which sucked, but the good thing about it was that they stayed true to the book this time. And that kiss shocked me a little, i mean i didnt mind at all but it was like a really long kiss considering a bunch of little kids were watching it too. oh well. im off to go read your recommendation. adios! and write more soon please.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 34! What was in the note?
person Fire Witch1
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Makes me wonder who the letter is from. Though I can say that I had forgotten about Pansy. I would have not thought about monitoring spells, does make me think and clear up alot.

-Britt ^^
person Heksy
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie,
Loved this chapter.
The way Snape is reacting is nicely worked out.
You did good.
Talk to ya soon
person tui
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! I love your story! i have been reading it from chap 1 right up until now over the last few days (work got in the way sometimes grrrr). I think that the way you are developing the characters is really interesting and although it isn't the same as the books thats fine as it is obviously AU and you've made the transitions completely believable. The way you've insterted Krai is brilliant such a useful way for you to explain things to the readers without it seeming to be just straight exposition.

Keep up the good work and if you are sending out email updates can I join the list?? pretty please...I'll give you cookie :) and if you ask nicely maybe some mead.....
person Selera
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I worship the ground you walk on. ^^ You are so good at this.