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by Vittani

schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. it was good and I'm glad that I can make you smile. It seems fitting that Harry and Krai are back together just for the simple fact that Harry has lost so many of those that he cares about. Oh, and "Wandless", I read it just a couple of days ago and it was brilliant. I'd like to see what else comes from that story. Ny way, I'll be waiting slightly impatiently for an update. VM
person misslala
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that Harry found Krai. :) I hate to hear that Tonks died, but there are casualties in war. *sigh* The one-shots you are writing a lot of fun! :) I still say I like yours better than some. Anyway, on to the chapter. :)

I miss seeing Harry and Draco toghether. I think him going to the ROR was a good idea. He needed the release and since the room can offer what he needs, all the better. I am interested to see what will happen now that Krai is back with Harry and how things may change or adapt to fit the changes.

Harry's urges for raw meat are interesting. It's been so long since I read all of his creature blood, but I think I will have to go back and see what was listed. :) I am glad you have your muse back, I was missing this story.
person Heksy
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun,
I was wondering where you disappeared to.
I only received your e-mail on the update, otherwise I would've answered.
About the chapter...I think you did quite well with Hagrid's accent.
I like the fact that you made harry find Krai, it seemed...I don't know...natural?
I'm looking forward to the next update, but take it easy, okay?
I'm worried about you.
very big {{{hug}}} and magic cookies ->
person Aaliyah
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey- I don
person Katie //.<
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm re-reading your fic again & when I came to chapter 24 (I didn't pay attention to it the first time I read your fic) & saw your reply to Draeconin, I got pissed off because 1) you were flamed, & 2) your were flamed by a fellow author, who is supposed to know better then to flame another author. Or at least have enough intelligence to understand that doing so is neither appreciated & a big no-no! Frankly I don't know who the hell this person thinks she or he is by flaming you just because they don't like your fanfic writing style. And not only does this Draeconin have the NERVE to flame you once but three times!?!? Unbelieveable!!

At Draeconin: I've read your fics and frankly they didn't leave much of an impression on me to make me want to go back and re-read them. In case your little grey cells never caught onto this, I'll be the one to say that Vittani-chan isn't writing this fanfic to gain your approval. Vittani-chan (like alot of other fanfic writers) is writing this fanfic for fun. Get over yourself with your nasty hen-pecking and leave Vittani-chan the hell alone!!
person Katie //.~
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my number one, all time favorite-favorite Harry Potter fanfic that's on the entire internet (it being a Harry/Draco is a bonus for me)!!! I look forward to the next update, & eventually it's final chapter.
person Kerrick
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi I am soo sorry that I have been able to keep up but my cursed boyfriend messed up my pc/ so I made him buy me a laptop! So I will be starting over!
person Bludraconis
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the wild dog thing you got going on. I have visited Ghana and while I did not see any wild dogs I did encounter alot of friggin lizards...
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just found this story and read the entire thing in one sitting. I couldn't help myself. I absolutely love it. And whoever sent you that flame is a few choice words I'm going to refrain from saying because I'm a nice person. My problem is the opposite of yours, I can write dialog but descripion defys me. I think you write wonderfully and I think this is one of the best stories I've had the pleasure to read. I love the relationship between Harry and Krai, but I am sorry about this new estrangement. I do hope Harry realizes his full potential soon, I can't wait to see what he is really capable of. I sincerly hope that they recruit more Slytherins to their cause. Its nice to see a little house unity finally, we didn't get any in the books. I know that its all going to come to a head soon and I can't wait to see what is really going to happen. When you do update this can you let me know? My email is redneckmama236@yahoo.com. Much love, can't wait for more.
person Jerica
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm finally all caught up. That was a lot to read. Good stuff though. I just hope that Krai comes back sometime soon. Who was the letter from? What was it about? I want to know about Harry's other blood inheritence. And what about Snape and Remus? I would like to hear more about them too.