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for Familiar

by Vittani

person Sycyla
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story all the way through so far and i think it's really good. I like the fact that the characters are developing slowly and because of it they seem like real people. I've read better fics but I think that if you ever went into writting origonal fics I'd buy your books.
person FireWitch1
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to end a chapter. You have a knack for that it seems. Thank you for updating. You showed alot of possible plot in this chapter. I can not wait to see which remains plot, and what is just the product of gears turning in Harry's mind. Will we get to see more of Harry/Draco? Please? Who will kill Dumbledoor I wonder, will it be Snape like in the books, or will it be Harry and Draco?

-Britt ^^
person Loretta
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Awesome fic so far!! I found it yesterday and just finished it now, would you mind adding me to the email list for update notices? Thanks heaps!!
person Loretta
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I forgot two things one my email address is lmammarella@gmail.com and the second is that there is a small typo where you've said roo instead of room but the funny thing is that being an aussie the minute I read that Harry was in the roo i got a picture of harry sitting in a Kangaroo's pouch snug as a bug looking around for Draco... LOL just about killed myself laughing with that one and then woke up my 5 month old. My bad..now I've got to get her back to sleep somehow as she's fighting me for the keyboard..
person Aaliyah
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i loved it!. best chapter so far. finally the slytherins have to make their choice. i especially liked the part at the end where draco shows harry to everyone, it was really sweet. and hey, that was a pretty fast update, so nice writing! i hope theres something harry can do for hermione, it makes me sad to think that she'll be like that forever. anyways, nice job, keep going!
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter!!! I sooo need chapter 36!
person Jan
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that I could tell you enough times how much I love this story. I loved the part when Harry revealed himself and then kissed Draco in front of the Slytherin's. Brilliant!.

Oh! By the way, I wanted to let you know that I have been enjoying your recommendation a lot. Keep it up!

Please update soon. ^_^
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was bloody brilliant! I loved it. cant wait for more. Dumbledork and Moldymort are going down. Hell Yeah! Woo-hoo. Im soo excited about what's still go come. Update soon. Please.
person Heksy
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie, sorry to hear you are struggling.
Still, here we are...your faithful reader.
Waiting to read yet another piece of your fntastic writing.
I loved this.
Nice build-up, emotions were strong, clear and believable.
Yup, you did great yet again.
One thing though...check it for some little spelling errors.
Lots of meade, cookies and other stuff coming your way.
By the way...HURRY UP WITH DM...I AM GETTING WITHDRAWAL PROBLEMS, teehee
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooo good. I'm curious about Hermione, though. I really want to know what is wrong with her. Is she imperioed, had her mind blocked or what. It's driving me crazy trying to find out what is wrong. Pansy is getting good at sticking up for herself and speaking her mind. I'm loving this. Please, Please, Please update soon