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by Vittani

person Katie //_^
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alot has happened since I left off at chapter 32! I'm glad Harry found Krai. And I'm convinced that it was Dumblef*ck (yes, that's how I refer Dumbledore as ever since he told Harry that it was his fault that his parents died -bastard!-) who posioned Krai. I'm sure we'll find out eventually. I'm glad that Krai is doing better but I've noticed that he's quieter now and he seems hesitant to voice an opinion. Is it because he's afraid of being told to leave again by Harry? I loved how Harry got adopted (I won't say who and give it away); now he'll have a second home to go home to. Yah! I'm curious as to what spell Dumblef*ck used on Hermione. To me it's obvious that he's the one. He'd do anything to manipulate the going-ons in Harry's life in order to control him. I can't wait for Dumblef*ck's plans to blow up in his face! I'm so looking forward to the future chapters! Bring on the next 15!

PS~You're welcome. Authors getting flamed (esp. by another author) is one of my top 5 pet-peeves.
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good as I expected. So I'll admit it, I was reviewing the story before reading that last chapter and before I knew it I'd read the whole thing again. Oops lol. Good Chapter. And I must say I was a little interested to see if Sirius and his parents are the only people he's got left to talk to. After all he can talk to any of his ANCESTORS correct? No matter how long they might have been dead. [wink] But I suppose that is to come up in the next chapter so I must stall my curiosity and wait to see. There are a lot of things that could be explained if the right questions get asked to the right people. Anyhow, Ignore my plotting mind, I tend to try and guess where the stories go from where they got left off or how I would go on with them. A bad habit I know. [Smile] So keep pulling those plot bunnies out from under the couch, you seem quite good at it. Mosta the time mine seem to get swept away in the weekly cleaning. Good luck with the next chapter. I wait patiently.

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Pal /or Katt
person Jerica
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like what you are doing with Halloween. I like the part with Harry's parents so far. I think they'll be understanding, especially if they have been watching him. I really like the part with Tonks. I hope something awfully nasty happens to Dumbledore.
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent as always V. I must be sick or something because that cliffie did not make me angry at all. weird eh? anyway must get back to filling out forms for college. there are just too many of them. waiting impatiently, VM
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this chapter. It was just so sweet how you wrote the Seventh Years' Halloween night.
person tay baby
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i read so i'm reviewing . hmmm i like the story it's slow but good i like that harry can see who really "sees" him and that you made it a point to show that ron did but hermonie didn't . please add me to your list so that i'll know when you update .
person Tay baby
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why is K. lying to Malfoy in the letters ? that sounds like it would make it harder on Harry . I mean Draco will be mad when he finds out right ?
person Jan
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You are EVIL I tell you evil... You almost made me cry. And I can't believe you are so evil as to leave it there...Please, please update chapter 37 soon, please.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, a very well written chapter as usual:-))
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Loved it when Harry talked to Tonks and his parents. That was great. I've already started Warriors in Love. It is a good story.