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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Overall, enjoyed the story.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEEheeee.....lovely chappie as per usualy. I must say though....I finished 10, went to scrounge for lunch and I come back to ....11! I love the term " went pear shaped" guessing is British slag, but its funny for this Canuk Skye
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW good job!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful action so far, Sheedy! :D If you want, I know a beta who could help you clean up the grammar glitches. But the story itself is lots of fun to read! Keep up the good work!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... hope every thing works out.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Kazfeist(sp?) that's exactly the kind of input I need to get better. I unfortunately don't have a beta and it has been years since I took an english class. I would love to know where the major mistakes are so that I can fix them. Feel free to drop me an email to point them out, I will try to make sure my email is available on my author panel.
To all of my other reviewers thank you so much for the words of encouragement. Your reviews do make such a difference in my muse.
To all of my other reviewers thank you so much for the words of encouragement. Your reviews do make such a difference in my muse.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful idea and well-executed, so far. Your original character seems a good match for Severus. Some annoying grammar glitches throughout, which I only mention because they distract from the lovely flow of your story. I might suggest a wonderful beta, named eilonwy1, who has a Livejournal.com account. She's an English professor and a wonderful author in her own right. Her stories, Baby Days and Baby Days2 are up at Coloured Grey. I wanted to wait until I'd read all the chapters before reviewing. Can't wait for more. :D
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS FIC UPDATE SOON!!!! OMG what's going to happen??? poor Hermione!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot Woot!!!! Yay for Severus and Sarah!!!!! Cant wait to see what happens next. and lol hopefully Severus wont need his room. hehehe. hope we get to find out. and I hope they work out. It would be awesome for Severus. and I am glad Draco and Hermione are finally moving forward and are sooo in love. They are soo cute together. I see dark clouds ahead though, the fun and fluff cant last forever. More more more Please. Please update soon.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. Good chappie. Poor Weasley's. it's quite sad and all.but also quite Happy too. Draco and Hermione are soooo cute together. more please. Update soon. Please.