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Ch 11 & 12 - Hmm, let's see now...I don't think Susan and Blaise would work because Mme Zabini wouldn't be happy with a Hufflepuff for a daughter-in-law. She wouldn't see Susan's inner strength. Now, Susan and Kingsley could work for me. She could help heal him.

I enjoyed the Founders. I liked the repartee and Salazar was a hoot. It will be interesting to see how powerful Voldemort is after his partial stripping of powers. I am a little concerned that Severus may have moved over to the Dark Lord's side with Hermione's rejection. All in all, there are lots of angles you are going to be able to take here.

Woot woot!!! Engaged and ohhh Severus is being a bit nasty and possessive in this one. Look out troubles brewing lol. And I really did like your take on Salazar. It was awesome. and the robes you described really did sound soo beautiful, I could picture them. and lol and I am glad Lucius has come to his senses. and lemons ahead yay!!!! And there is definitely trouble ahead for the couple. Mrs Zabini and Kingsley and Severus. I just hope they learn to cling to one another through all the trials ahead. yay cant wait for t he next cahppie. More more more please. Please update soon.

what a cute story :)
i feel sorry for snape and shacklebolt though :(
and isn't it a bit soon., they only know each other for ..what..a week?
that's the only comment i have though :) i like your writing!

"No one noticed a black Wizard creep slowly and silently out of the room looking dejected and heartbroken. Kingsley Shacklebolt decided he would never love again!" Awwwwwwww:'( Pooooor Kingsley! Nice chapter:)Update.

wow .. i love it hmm what is sev going to do now .. i hope baise understands... kingsely will find love again ..hmm what about hannah and baise ...... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

k. i haven't even read ch 12 yet but I had to laugh at your reply to me...So...chocolate covered Rickman....????? Think hershey's would consider that for a new product? lol..okay now on to Sat. Con't!!

review of chap. 12 part II........ OKAY DEFINITELY GOING TO DEVELOP A CHOCOLATE COVERED SLYTHERIN CANDY!!!!! I'll send you the prototypes.....Oh that was (of course) another fantastic chapter!!!!! Sneaky Lucius fudging the truth about Zambini...I hope you have nice plans for Hannah, I like the way your writing her true to Hufflepuff style! k, off to the candy shoppe.....hmmm do they even have 6 foot tall bags??????

hermione broke so many hearts just then. lol great chapters. sorry about not reviewing of late i have been busy. cant wait for more.

Loved it! Poor Severus. Feel kind of sorry for him. And Kingsley too. Wonder what Mrs Zabini has in mind? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

I cannot believe that this is your first heavily reviewed chapter. I have told you before that I think that you are such a great writer, in fact one of my favorites! Again, congrats on being so popular. I love this story because of the UST between the two that I know will eventually be relieved. My heart just breaks for Kingsley. He needs someone to ease the heart break that is Hermione. I really didn't see the twist coming for him to be the dark dejected person, I thought it would be Snape. I really do not like his darkness, but I guess for conflict he serves his purpose. That said, Mrs. Zambini will also be a rather large obstacle for them to over come. I cannot wait to see what you have planned next for her. I also enjoyed the realistic touch of the gossiping nature of the ball's attendees, since that is just the way people are. They love to talk about others. Anyhow, keep up the awesome work and congrats on being so popular! :)