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by Rumpelyssa

person ShilohDarke
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have finally had the chance to sit down and read... Boy was I thrilled. There were two chapters ready for me! That was awesome! I am glad to see someone else thinking to use Rowena, as well as the other founders of Hogwarts! I loved it!

Please update soon! I promise I will try to get a chapter or two up for Dare to Dance in a couple of days!

SD
person SmileZ
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off. Chapter eight: HAHAHA! RED! HAHA why black or green? lol appeal to his slytherin side? lol hey but red works. it definitely attracts attention.
chapter nine: DAMN HARRY! RUIN IT FOR THE GIRL! BEST FRIENDS WANT BEST FRIENDS TO GET LAID OKAY! You shouldn't interrupt when they're on the brink of the act. lol
chapter ten: WHAT THE HELL! The founding four are... like... whoa. this definitely adds a new twist into your story. I'd like to say that Lucius sucks. Hermione was finally going to get some, but NOOOO he just had to throw a tantrum. Well now there's going to be a lot of competition and jealousy issues eh? you know me too good. hehe. AND yeah my email is up there, i'd like to know what your religion is. i'm undecided myself. i personally see it as all a mix. it depends on mood huh? well off to your next chapter!
person SmileZ
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! OH SHIT! HAHA Damn. Four enemies ready to do something about Hermione and Lucious huh? This story is the bomb BELLA! You totally rock! UH HUH! I can't wait till the next chapter! I can't believed their engaged, and you're not even half way through with this story. Sheez. I hope there's a lot more drama before the wedding happens. You know, making Lucius jealous is one of my joys in life. Plus he gets all raging and turns CAPS LOCKY like Harry does. lol Anyways, I adore you Bella! I'd totally marry you if I swang that way, somewhat of a pity that I don't. Anyways toodles til next time!
person Criosdan
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As Hermione I desperate wait for lemon. :D
person h
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon. aren't they the cutest couple
person jcm
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, oh my go, oh my god!!! *squeel* THE DRAMA! This keeps getting better and better. though i must admit... i realy liked Snape in there - he's so dark and well... Snape! anywho, yes. i'm still here on the line, being reeled in... Cheers. -JCM
person Ms L
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing! It's definitely one of the best I've found on this site so far :]

I love your take on the characters, and your story line is so original. A delicious story with enticing plot. Well done, and keep up the great work! I can't wait for an update :]
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do NOT feel sorry for Snape WHATSOEVER. Hate Mrs. Zabini (Won't go into how I feel about Blaise so as not to offend you. Aren't I nice?). Feel VERY VERY sorry for Kingsley as I like him alot. Find him someone, will you EBQ? Hannah, too. And Dammit bring on some lemons why dontcha?
person marie_606
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my... my pulse is throug the roof!!!! as alway you're the best.... but you had a few grammars.... you're = you are your= belongs to you she's/he's =she/he is his/hers= belongs to him/her

can hardly wait for the next chap :P