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by Rumpelyssa

person LaBibliographe
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a lovely lemon. It was worth waiting for, if you got writer's block halfway through. It never does to hurry the love scenes. And now something more to look forward to - a happy future family for the new Mr. and Mrs. Malfoy (I'm assuming from the vision, they got married instead of just living together 8-). Lucius was forgiven by Draco for taking his place with Hermione so that means both of Lucius' dead family members have voted for him to take Hermione as his own. Which I notice he did very thoroughly in your LOVELY LEMON!! Great Christmas present - thanks! Now, I hope you make my New Year's Eve equally entertaining (unsubtle hint for an update...) Happy Holidays!!
person BuffyXO
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow thank you for the lemons! They were well worth the wait!!! I really enjoyed this chapter, lemons aside, because it featured Draco absolving Lucius and thus allowing him to really move toward a future with Hermione. It was a beautiful sentiment of him wanting his father to be happy and understanding the complicated Hermione Granger. Now, the dream is really interesting and I cannot wait to see how you will play this one out. As always I love your writing and narative style -- it is captivating. Merry Christmas (if you celebrate it) and keep up the awesome work. :)
person firewall
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how you resolved your writer's block...interesting dreams that Lucius had and a bit of a scarey foreshadowing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person angel
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great.. im glad he now that draco has forgiven him .. man i hope they can stop voldy befor he can hurt their unborn son ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. have a merry x-mas and later for now

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person Lady Lynn
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How nice of dead Draco.... what's up with the dream...? hmm. Im looking forward to finding out.
person Citten
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not her, not her--what! you cant just leave a ending of a chapter like that. it may just give me a heartattack! well i do hope another chapter is on its way!
sorry i didn't get a chance earilier to review on the last chapter i just got to my aunts, who has internet, and now just read them. well that was sad about kinsley but if you don't do or at least say what is in your heart about someone that is kind of what happens. blase's mom is kinda scary, and remus is just cute about hermione and i am wow about snape. boy we better watch out if any of them get together we maybe in trouble-by them i mean mrs. zembie, snape, and voldemort- that could be scary! well post soon!!!
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not her WHAT!!?????? that was evil, and a brilliant cliffy... post soon
person Dee Dee
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this new chapter, finally they got together! I guess the dream could be part of Vodemort
person Mary
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This was really good! Lucius and Hermione finally got together at last. Wonder what the others have in store for them? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person snapeslave
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i want for christmas is a new update...a new update...a new update...all i want for christmas is a new update...and it will be a merry christmas...that concludes the entertainment portion of my review..now the begging...please please please...update soon...i am on bended knees with fingers eyes legs toes and everything else i can cross crossed...in case you did not get my ever so suttle hint...UPDATE NOW PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE...