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by Rumpelyssa

person BuckyKattGirl
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist with Snape! I'm thinking Barty Crouch sounds like a good suspect! Nice touch on that death scene for Blaise (not that I care, he bores the shit out of me). Can't wait to see what's next!
person CoralineBlack
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES an update, once again I really enjoyed reading your story!
I'm infatuated, it just can't be helped... And whoever is tormenting our beloved Severus Snape should know that he will most likely be hunted down by a lot of enraged fan-girls, so watch out whom ever you are!!!!
person LadyLexie
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
This has to be one of the most unique Lucius/Hermione stories I've ever read!
I really want to know what happens next, so update soon!

Keep up the fantastic work!
person Citten
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i do hope that you will have an update soon (boy what is it about unlucky 13?) for i am dying for a new chapter and you use to have a new chapter evey few days or at least once a week. hope you are well and we will be reading a new chapter soon. :)
person CoralineBlack
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, More more!!! I keep starting to read your storis cos they are so bloody good, but not finished, oh well I'll just have to be patient (though it is not one of my "virtues" Muhahahah)
I was wondering didn't Hermione get it on with Snape? cos you wrote that she had only known Blaise, but no matter. I really enjoy myself when I'm reading your stories :-D
Keep up the good work
person Ms L
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely amazing. Above and beyond my expectations... simply wonderful :] Keep up the brilliant work!

Update soon! :]
person strangerdanger89
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow you left it at one hell of a clifhanger!
You better continue with this one!
I am reading some of your other stories... I want you to update those ones to!
you are such a great writer! I hope you keep up the freat work

later
strangerdanger89
person sinbad
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, that was one way of overcomming writers block. You are doing a great job I was never a Malfoy fan (I like Snape) but you certainly gave me something new to think about.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Overall i would have to say it is a brilliantly written story. Only advice I have is to watch your tenes when youre narrating. Also, when it comes to lovemaking, the technical terms kind of shatter the mood, so try branching out and using different terminology. ANy way loved the story, cant wait to here more of your stuff ^_^.
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About damn time, EBQ! Good start with the lemons, but stop there!