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by Rumpelyssa

schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Lucius needs to protect her!!!!

Who is the one posing as Severus? Hmm..maybe Barty crouch jr. or Regulus Black? I have no idea...I'm curious!!!

update soon!!!
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Your story is so amazing, I just sat down and read the entire thing (it took me an hour and a half). There was one little thing I noticed: On Hermiones first day Lucius says she should be present at his ball on Saturday, and she says she will have to cancel her plans with her mother, and then later she says her parents were killed some time ago. But other than that I thought it was fantastic, and I cant wait for the next installment!!
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! An update! It's about time. Great chapters. I can't wait to see who has Severus kidnapped and who is in his place. Wonderful work!! Update soon please!!
person Pumkin
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why do you leave us hanging? love the story. can't wait to see who is impersonating snape. keep up the good work and update soon please.
person Lyssa
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon...please....i'm dying to know more
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14: So Snape isn't Snape. Glowy red eyes, hmmm. Voldie having some fun? I sincerely hope there was something in that purple shampoo to coerce Hermione into sex with "Snape" because otherwise that girl is doing some extraordinary bedhopping - poor Lucius (I never hought I'd say THAT!)

Well, that takes care of Blaise. It was truly merciful to put him out of his misery (and write him out of the story for which I am grateful. Too many men around Hermione... Sheesh, even the doctor wanted to chat her up! She must be as magnetic in her way as Lucius is.) So tell Regulus to keep his mitts to himself.

Oh, oh. Ginny isn't going to cause trouble for Lucius and Hermione, is she?

I liked the snuggling between our pair at Hogwarts. I could see them standing together, hugging each other. Warm and fuzzy. Nice!

Nice long chapter with ANOTHER lovely lemon or TWO! I'm getting spoiled here, so I'll understand if your characters actually have to do other things for a while. 8-)

Toward the end of the chapter, look for the phrase,
person Sapphire
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Blaise ... this story is awesome by the way. Please update soon ... and I'm dying of curiosity - who's pretending to be Severus Snape? The imposter has it BAD for Hermione.
person Criosdan
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus. Will he be rescued?
person Mary
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This chapter was really good! Poor Snape! I'm wondering who is impersonating him? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person Sahira
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For God's sake I don't know how long I have been waiting for this update!!!!!!!!!!!!! So update..again;)Love this! I'm quessing not-Sanpe is our dear old Voldemort...there was a mention of redflash in not-Sanpe's eyes...I think.