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by Rumpelyssa

person Lady Darcy
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I love this story. It makes me giddy.
I've read plenty of stories that contain information about Hermione's future career plans, and while I think that she would make a fair Auror or Healer as is common, I just don't think they fit her personality. I can picture her as a secretary, although I think the term "personal assistant" might be more appropriate.
Never mind, though, because this is wonderful! I eagerly await the next installments!
I loved the banter between the Hogwarts founders and Salazar's reaction to Voldemort had me in stitches. Gryffindor's comment to Harry though, about his eyes, that means that Harry's mother carried the Gryffindor gene! I love it, since other Harry Gryffindor stories tend to have the opposite, with the Potters having the Gryffindor blood.
Oh, and Snape! I love Snape, and hate him at the same time (well, technically the Snape imposter.) I think that the imposter is Regalus Black. I'm unsure as to why I suspect him, I just do. Can't wait!

Oh, one more note. I noticed that towards the end of chapter one, at the part where Lucius tells Hermione about the Saturday gala, Hermione, in her thoughts, mentions having to break plans with her mother, although later her mother is revealed as dead. Just though you might want to change that one little detail.
person Lady Darcy
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH!
I just re-read the last chapter! With Ginny's hatred!
Is there a Ginny/Hermione catfight coming up? Or a Ginny-tries-to-kill-Luscious-Lucius? DRAMA!

I need a happy ending though.
person sinbad
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to it!
person Annie
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
who is snape, when is she going to tell lucius(SP?) about the shower? oh the drama...
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor blaise ..hmm what is and has black been up to ...is tom going arould looking like sev ..and why did harry scream ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Citten
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well this chapter has me releaved and terrible upset at the same time. glad it really is not snape and really petreafied as to who it really is! i do hope that you will give us an update sooner than this one was. i really dont know how you keep up FOUR stories at the same time you are just a little crazy, my dear. ;) just the way i like it. :) hope to read more soon.
person Emmah
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought Regulas Black or whatever his name is died... Said so in OotP...
person Ms L
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word: Amazing! Definitely going above and beyond, again.


Keep up the great work... I can't wait until the fake Snape is revealed.

Update soon!
person DB1
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@14. great story i love it. please update soon.

*DB*