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wow that was awesome ... i like how she stood up for him please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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Lucius can train me anyday,but idon't know about the makeing fun of Severus,AND HE HAS A STYLE ALL HIS OWN.wE ARE GOING TO BE SEEING sEVERUS IN THIS TO AREN'T WEIT JUST ISN'T A STOTY WITHOUT SEVERUS.I CAN UNDERSTAND WHY AURTER FELLS THE WAY HE DOES ABOUT LUCIUS,HE HAS SEEN ALOT OF THE THINGS LUCIUS HAS DONE IN THE PAST,AND THAT MAKES TRUST HARD.THE MALFOYS HAVE ALWAYS BEEN BATRADED AS A CLOSE FAMILY IN THE BOOKS,WHAT CISSY WENT THROUGH IN THE 6TH BOOK SHOWS SHE HAS ALOT OF LOVE FOR HER SON.NOMATTER HOW WE THINK OF LUCIUS ALL THE SIGNS POINT TO HE LOVES HIS FAMILY,AND THAY LOVE HIM.VERY FEW FAN FICS SHOW ANY OF THAT,THATS WHY I LIKE YOURS SO MUCH BECAUSE YOU WRITE THE WHOLE PICTURE.

This sounds like a very promising storyline. I'm a sucker for boss-secretary stories so this suits me perfectly. I do like how you haven't rushed Hermione into Lucius's arms and made them fall all over each other right away. That he's lonesome seems workable, even though it's only been six months since his family died. He never struck me as a loner type so she probably seems interesting to him. Plus he can already see she is living up to her reputation as clever. I don't think the mature Lucius would be interested in anyone without brains even if the packaging was spectacular. (Well, he might enjoy unwrapping the package briefly before tossing it away...) They do suit each other and if they find that out after, say, 20-30 chapters then I'll be reading each and every one of them. I hope Lucius isn't TOO saintly, but I do like the possibility that he isn't going to be mad, bad, and dangerous to know. Okay, maybe a teeny, tiny bit bad. If I wanted bland, boring, and upstanding I could read a story about Arthur. Oh! Maybe there aren't any... 8-)

Ohh...I like this story a lot. I love seeing Hermione paired with Lucius. It is a wonderful change from seeing her paired with Snape all the time. Please update soon and you are doing a great job!!

Wow you did it again, I love this story!
When Lucius makes his move I wonder if Hermione will go for it, or do the

I don't see any major similarites in the two stories and am looking forward to seeing what you have happen in this fic.

i love the story and no i dont see any similarities and hey there are never any two stories ever alike. so happy that you have thaught of your loyal reader and are giving us another wonderful-great story to read by one of the great masters. so as usual update often! :)

Brava! Hhmmm...lucky Hermione...getting to work in such close quarters with Lucious Lucius. *big cheesy grin*
Looking forward to reading this one and update soon!

I love it! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.