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I loved it! Poor Lucius can't make up his mind about he and hermione. And I loved Ron's reaction about all the shopping bags she had! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Cooool! I'd love to get Malfoy for myself too, sign me down for next secretary practices!

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I'm very much enjoying this one. It makes for an interesting twist on the how-they-met angle. My only -slight- quibble is that you've stated Hermione's ambition is to be a secretary. I picture her as wanting to put her organizational skills to use for more than just making one person look good. Secretary as a starting point, maybe, but not as her ultimate goal. I can picture her as working her way up to the top of the Wizarding equivalent of FEMA or something like that... where groups will have to be deployed to handle emergencies at a moment's notice, and organization is the key. (Yes, I know there's a Ministry department that does something like that, but I don't have time to comb the books to look it up right this moment. The family is waiting for me to finish writing this review so we can go out for breakfast.)

Anyway, I'm happy to see such a quick update and hope to see many more.

~Catstaff

Realistically, I know that Lucius isn't meant to be anywhere near a nice person in canon, but I can't help being totally seduced by your Lucius, commanding and arrogant, but a caring family man who has lost his whole family to tragedy. Oh, did I mention sexy? His attraction to her legs is a very believable way for him to start liking more of her and his errant thought about making Hermione his wife was shivery good - as though the idea had sneaked up on him from his own mind.

I'm enjoying your take on Lucius and Hermione, and the way you are getting them together is great, with other characters breaking up the intensity of the L&H initial interaction. I really like this story. I spend more time writing than reading, but I'll be waitng for your update. Thanks for writing this!

I must say, I like where you are going with this story so far and I love that her virginity went to Zabini of all people! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Poor Lucius, so sad and so alone. There is a spark there and I do hope Hermione opens her eyes to it and convinces Lucius he can live and love again. I like this Lucius, he's humble but ohh so sad. and He loved Narcissa and his son. The lil talk with her painting before bed was so heart rending, he still assured her no one could replace her. He needs someone and am glad Narcissa told him as much. Love it Bella. it's another awesome story. and lol I would definitely love it that Narcissa was updated. awaiting the next chappie.

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

Thank for this new LM/HG story, can

way to go Hermione for sticking up for Severus to Harry,loved it.I love how you write Molly in your stories,you not only write her as having the fellings of a wife and mother,but also a life before the husband and kids.I felt bad for Lucius when he was thinking about Narcissaand Draco,he even blames himself for Severus and I don't think thay want him doing that.I know soon you will make Lucius happy,and we could see alittle more Severus!Can't wait for more.

Well, I am a brand-spankin'-new Lucius/Hermoine Fan ( just started today!, as I'm reading waaaaay to fast through the DM/HG and SS/HG stories)

This one has me tingling for more!