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by Rumpelyssa

person Mary
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This chapter was really good! I loved the whole jealousy thing that Lucius has going on whenever Ron or Blaise looks at Hermione. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person Pam
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person Lyssa
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
I like this story...
...oh and get rid of zabini...go for Lucius!!
person Shilohdarke
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The only complaint I have is you stopped! I want more, dern it! I was like... AND???? Okay, so, I will shut up because I know that I am guilty of doing that exact same thing! I loved the chapter, dear and I am anxious for the next one! That is a highly spritual thing, you know... to be adopted by an eagle? Native Americans believe that to be chosen by an eagle is a sign that you are an ancient soul, and a teacher among men.(or in this case, PEOPLE)

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person Dee Dee
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that Lucius suspects Hermione can change into a golden eagle. Maybe real eagles can recognize that and are attracted to her.
I can
person MistressMalfoy
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm what's better than Lucius thinking evil thoughts? It's blaise! yum I love Blaise! :)well done!
person candymac
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermione should have mad Blaize suck up with jewelry! Maybe the naughty Lucius should come out to play, and show Hermione a true Slytherin. Still and absolutely fabulous chapter, keep up the good work.
person Cecilia
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn!! Another update. I like the fact that Lucius is civil in this story, so far, because too many times he is portrayed as being very evil. I like this version of him. Great job and update soon please!!!!!
person LaBibliographe
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Criosdan
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. I can't get enough of them and Lucius.