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by Rumpelyssa

person skye
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG..why did I wait so long to jump on the HG/LM ship???? this is so cool! ( yeah, I grew up in the 80's..hex me!) Bella, your doing a wonderful job as usual with your tale. bravo bravo!
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait for more! Get rid of the Zabini jerk and get Luscious Lucius over his issues and I'll be ecstatic!
person Citten
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you better continue this story sweety! i so love the way in which you have painted lucius' and hermione's characters. i just love everything i also like the twist about him helping and guiding severus, question is severus going to suprise us soon? i do hope you have another chapter ready soon! and as always i do hope this is a long.........................................story! :)
person ccrawley
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool story. not really sure about the whole shimmer part and what not. hpe she dumps bz for being an ass. forgive and forget is all nice, but once an ass always an ass.
person Citten
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea! i love long stories! now.... you better have another chapter ready! what can i say i am impaishant.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! A lovely little triangle being set up, lloking forward to what happens next so update soon!
person Anathema
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, sooooooo...you're an evil little cliffie witch, ya know that right? ^__^

I feel so bad for Lucius in this fic! He reminds me of a little boy for some reason, always trying to please Hermione and doing things for her...of course some of the thoughts he's having about her seem anything BUT innocent...Lucky girl. LoL


Excellent, excellent! Update soon!
person lisa
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it thats what i have to say. lol Poor Harry quite tortured with Ginny not there. and I guess there's a lil hedonist hidden in Hermione somewhere lol. House full of men , she needs to be more careul lest some others walk in on her. And Awwww Lucius is being so sweet. It's nice to see him help someone else. Blaise however has some nerve to just waltz in and try and sweep her off her feet. I hope she sees through him or catches him being untruthful or cheating. Everyone deserves a second chance though. Still what he did was harsh. and Possibly he's up to something. maybe? Time will tell. More more more more please. Love it. and what did the whole bonding thingy with the eagle mean? cant wait to find out. arggg evil cliffies are abounding today. Please update soon.
person liquidvamp
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah the evil cliffhanger. What's so special about that ruddy bird liking her. Please update soon. I'll feed you cookies and icecream if you do.
person angel
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. hmm what does he not know ... and what is up with blaise ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel