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by Rumpelyssa

person ShilohDarke
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I tried to send you some info on totem animals... but it kept coming back to me saying that the e-mail couldn't be sent. I saved it to my computer. If you want to e-mail me, then I will just respond and put the info inside that e-mail.

On to the review! I love it. I don't have anything against Blaise, although I am sad for Lucius. I feel like he should just sweep her up into his arms and tell her that She needs an older man to appreciate her for who she is and make her happy... (nah, that is probably too sappy!) LOL Anyway... I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

SD
person Dee Dee
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, I loved this chapter. BZ looks like a good guy now, so I am starting to forgive him. But I can
person LaBibliographe
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for not letting Lucius and Hermione fall into each other's arms too fast. They've got chapters and chapters (I hope) for love to find a way. Blaise was truly a gentleman and deserved better than he got, poor guy. Especially as somewhere down the line he's going to lose Hermione too.

Are they both underage yet to be brandishing wands at foes? I was a little confused that they couldn't save themselves that way. I guess they haven't learned to apparate yet, huh? I assume Blaise won't have any trouble being treated in a Muggle hospital. After all, Hermione and all other Muggleborn children must be treated by human doctors before they get sent to magical school.

So the line, "The dog!", DID come from Peter Pan. lol I love it. I adore the movie, but I think Jason Isaacs must have a magic touch himself to make so many characters so special. He's an amazing actor.

Please more UST. I'm lapping it up. You've added drama and excitement to the boss and secretary storyline, making it really multidimensional.

I hope you update soon so I can watch Lucius and Hermione dance around each other some more. He's trying so hard to be honorable. I'm enjoying this Lucius very much. Sexy stuff!!
person Catstaff
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Blaise indeed! Although I'm feeling sorry for Lucius as well right now. Poor guy was already feeling torn about pursuing Hermione because he thinks she deserves more than some old Death Eater... now he's likely to -really- be torn about stepping forward as Blaise's rival since the young man got shot in defending her.

And yes, Ron was, is, and always will be, a doofus.

~Catstaff
person angel
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really really brave of blaise .... man what is going to happen now i hope harry is there to help bring dudley and piers in but will happen to david since he was the one that tried to rap mione ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person DarkLady
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh BLAISE! *sobs* not my poor baby Blaise! I almost want him and Hermione to stay together hehehe will he be okay? Love Lucius sucking her fingers and being all bumbling hehe
person Jan
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this fic and I am patiently waiting for more
person Cheri
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I did like the Cliff hanger at the end of chapter 3. What does it mean and the shared dream, too. Can't wait to see.
person Annie
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh more more!
person Sampdoria
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, I am very, very happy about the new chapter, but what an evil way to en it.... Please update soon, I need to know what Lucius is thinking about. I also want Blaise gone, sure it's great that he said he was sorry, but I don't want Hermione to make the same mistake twice.
Keep writing, I will look for updates each day:-))